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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 27, 2007 10:59:42 GMT -6
and at last below is the third of these butterfly poems ...
and at last the publisher has all three of them in hand
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 27, 2007 11:06:55 GMT -6
LIVING-LACE
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join me M' Lady-Love
please tarry with me in this flowered meadow
where butterfly beauty abounds so to thrill our captured attention
linger we may midst such caprice of gossamer glory in cordial flight
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butterfly ballet of most gentle motion butterfly kisses of most tender touch
alluring is their amiable charm amusing are their delightful maneuvers
enchanted grace of their aerial waltz mystifies us within its random choreography
arabesque patterns of their pirouettes uplift us through their quietude of bliss
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by serene welcome of our endearing hosts we admire true flair of their winged spectacle
by divine whim of captivating accompaniment we adore their finesse in surreal animation
through this crystalline window of still air we behold the flourish of their living-lace
in such pristine hush of invitational calm we are enlightened by butterfly peace
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among the hues of myriad blooms sharing the influence of their aroma
the soothing magic of butterfly euphoria blends with floral infusion to cast its spell
though perhaps fleeting are these chance momentary encounters
their dreamy vision lives ever on within our gauze-like memories
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thus may we heed the silent inspiration these sublime creatures obligingly offer
... sshhhh ... and enjoy
allay all thoughts of time be tranquil M' Love
simply ... sshhhh ...
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Post by bichsa on Sept 28, 2007 7:56:13 GMT -6
SIMPLY BEATIFUL!!!! I was invisioning the scene of a wonderous medow filled with butterflies dance about with one another having a conversation in their moves.Clap Clap!!! But I suppose there could be many different scence in each individuals mind .
much peace dear one!C.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 28, 2007 13:38:22 GMT -6
thank you for your inspiration and sweet commentay, bichsa.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 2, 2007 22:22:33 GMT -6
The two directors of my publisher have just called me tell me how wonderfully impressed they are with this poetry-platform we all share ...
at times they secretively enter the 'halls' of our campus-of-composition just to view the marvelous talent present herein and they were here earlier this day enjoying our writings (though they wondered why this poem above hasn't had more attention) ...
It's nice to know that publishers whoever they may be representing will visit us here from time to time simply to see how creatively gifted all of us truly are ... ALL of us
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Post by anirbas on Oct 3, 2007 8:23:52 GMT -6
Good to know, Jeffnims! We welcome any and all readers to these realms and do hope they enjoy their "visitation" each time they dare tarry and go adventuring here!
BTW...Enchanting and hypnotic writing as always, nimfweend!!!! Got more??? Nir.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 3, 2007 12:22:36 GMT -6
yes, 'Brina, it is nice to know that. Also, thank you...thank you... for your joyful reply.
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Post by anirbas on Oct 3, 2007 20:35:07 GMT -6
You're very welcome, Nims...Just wish I had a tad more time to read all of you and write a bit more myself, too...But, work takes precedent in my life at this moment...Freedom isn't free, afterall...LOL...Really tickled to know and am honored by your visitors...As I, too, feel we have a very, very talented crew at the helm of this spaceship known as Poetryseasons...But, then again, as an administrator, I'm more than a bit prejudiced where ya'll are concerned...Our "stable" of poets...ggglggglgggl...Proud of all of you and for the daring it takes to share one's creative babies with the world, at large...And now, off I go...As it's one of our resident teenager's turn to use the computer...LOL...Take care folks and nightie night! Sabrina.
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