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Post by amycando on Dec 26, 2006 18:32:49 GMT -6
(does not have to be about nature)
cold
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Post by dawness on Jan 2, 2007 1:55:13 GMT -6
the cold of evening
bites the frost of morning's toungue
i caress your soul
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Post by anirbas on Jan 2, 2007 23:28:13 GMT -6
beautiful haiku, Aurora...b-b-b-b-b-b-b-but, if you'll permit me to say so...
you were only supposed to add one word...gigglegigglegiggle...
stop that...stop throwing things at me from your desk...hehehehehehe...
that's the problem i have, as well, with add one word, or one line games...
i want to finish them...please, do me a favor and post this gem of a haiku
on the traditional board, too...eet's gorgeeus, sweets!
i don't know where to go with this, now, AC...
so, please provide another starting word...
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Post by dawness on Jan 3, 2007 5:24:01 GMT -6
i just threw ciggies, pizza, creme brulee at you, sabs. LOL... how do we do this? hey, aims... HELP!!!
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Post by anirbas on Jan 3, 2007 22:36:25 GMT -6
yum...ciggies and pizza...my two favorite food groups...and the creme brulee didn't
taste half bad, either...
this is like one of those dadaistic games poets used to play...i get that...
but, we don't have a hat to put individual words in, and pull out one at a time...
we have to use our own heads as the hat...pull out one word...then wait for the next poet
to pull out a word, from the hat of their head...
it will be most fun to do, and work best, when there are at least two at a time and the more the merrier, going at it, in here...say, when you and Amy, or you and me, or you and me and Amy and anyone else with the daring or the audacity to play, gets involved, while we are in here, at the same time...well, not the same time, as we are global but at the same time, none the less...ha...an oxymoron...sort of...the more playing at a time, it will keep the flow going...
the back and forth repartee between all our quick little minds at play...
since i don't see Aims around, i'll throw out a word to start this pony running again...
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Post by anirbas on Jan 3, 2007 22:38:01 GMT -6
the
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Post by amycando on Jan 4, 2007 13:21:46 GMT -6
the sumptuous
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Post by dawness on Jan 4, 2007 13:53:29 GMT -6
the sumptuous garden
( eeeeks, am i getting this right, aims and sabs???)
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Post by anirbas on Jan 4, 2007 14:00:45 GMT -6
hehehehehe...you're so cute, when you're confused, DG....
we're going to work with that first line...though garden makes it a six syllable line,
as opposed to a five syllable line...actually, there is more than the 5-7-5 form of haiku
anyway...i'm roleplaying teacher, today...ggglgggl...
the sumptuous garden
withered
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Post by amycando on Jan 4, 2007 14:05:20 GMT -6
the sumptuous garden
explodes
You've got the idea but it should have been a one sylable
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Post by amycando on Jan 4, 2007 14:06:15 GMT -6
oops sabrina we cross posted!
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Post by anirbas on Jan 4, 2007 19:38:39 GMT -6
hehe...i was waiting for that to happen...someone to crosspost...your mind is more optimistic than mine today...i used the word withered, you used explodes...LOL...i'm going
with your word...
the sumptuous garden
explodes with
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Post by dawness on Jan 5, 2007 8:32:01 GMT -6
yup, the traditional 5--7--5. i was so sleepy then, soweee.
the sumptuous garden
explodes with decadent
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Post by anirbas on Jan 5, 2007 18:44:57 GMT -6
the sumptuous garden
explodes with decadent rot...
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Post by amycando on Jan 5, 2007 20:12:59 GMT -6
the sumptuous garden
explodes with decadent rot...
amidst
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Post by anirbas on Jan 6, 2007 0:47:24 GMT -6
the sumptuous garden
explodes with decadent rot...
amidst blooms
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Post by dawness on Jan 9, 2007 7:46:21 GMT -6
the sumptuous garden explodes with decadent rot... amidst blooms of thorns  word: breathe |
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Post by Sam on Jan 9, 2007 14:45:05 GMT -6
breathe into
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Post by anirbas on Jan 11, 2007 10:18:33 GMT -6
*hey, i like our first collaborative haiku, girls! we did it! and look, Sammy's on board, now!
grrrrreat and good to see you back, galpal! thank the powers that be and the universe,
the flipping holidays are over and done! yes, ladies? or perhaps i'm just a natural grinch*
~*~
breathe into moments
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Post by Sam on Jan 12, 2007 9:28:08 GMT -6
breathe into moments
whisper
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Post by anirbas on Jan 13, 2007 9:07:56 GMT -6
breathe into moments
whisper quietly
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Post by Sam on Jan 18, 2007 13:33:13 GMT -6
breathe into moments
whisper quietly fragments
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Post by Sam on Jan 19, 2007 10:56:49 GMT -6
breathe into moments
whisper quietly fragments
of
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Post by Sam on Jan 19, 2007 16:14:25 GMT -6
Breathe into moments,
whisper quietly fragments
of last nights loving
Sam
Hurry
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Post by anirbas on Jan 20, 2007 1:40:24 GMT -6
Uh-oh...Somebody thought they were in the add-a-line haiku game...Instead of the add-a-WORD haiku game...ggglgggl...
S'okay...No one is perfect here, except for perhaps Poe...As the elders have appointed him their mouthpiece, so he must be perfect...Dodges flying pens and things, from Poe's desk...
You're so cute when you flub, Sams...I'm...roflmao...
Dodges flying pens and things, from Sam's desk...ggglgggl...
By the way...Good line...
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Post by anirbas on Jan 20, 2007 1:44:52 GMT -6
Hurry, Tomorrow!
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Post by amycando on Jan 20, 2007 21:04:37 GMT -6
Hurry, Tomorrow!
softly
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Post by soulfir3 on Jan 21, 2007 19:32:00 GMT -6
Hurry, Tomorrow!
softly surrender
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Post by anirbas on Jan 21, 2007 22:07:17 GMT -6
Hurry, Tomorrow!
softly surrender treasure
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Post by dawness on Jan 22, 2007 9:01:43 GMT -6
Hurry, Tomorrow!
softly surrender treasure burned
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