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Post by redrose on Jan 2, 2009 6:57:55 GMT -6
Air fills the essence within her fragile soul
Earth grounding her unsteady tremble of existence
Fire flames the dim light of her broken heart
Water heals her emotional wounds that life has inflicted
Invoking God and Goddess into her sacred circle she cast
God strengthens the courage she lost
Goddess soothes and replenishes her empowerment
She fills with white light and it feels easy to cope again
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Post by anirbas on Jan 2, 2009 16:31:53 GMT -6
Hail and welcome to our alternate universe of poetry, Redrose!
Thank you for sharing your poetical offering with us, lady!
Well written piece, dealing with a universal subject:
the quest of humankind to look beyond "itself" for courage and peace.
I'm not sure why you posted it on the Fantasy board...As it very much deals
with the reality and truth of being a human...Might I move it
to the Philosophy/Spirituality/Religion board with your blessing?
Make yourself at home in the halls of the 'Seasons...
And post more Redrosian poems, at your whim and will!
Anirbas aka Sabrina.
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Post by redrose on Jan 5, 2009 8:34:44 GMT -6
thank you lady Sabrina it is a beautiful site which im sure i will find aot o joy in ,
to be honest i hadnt thought of it in that light but now i see where that idea spring from
i posted it here because under fantasy and folklore it said witches and this is a piece about a solitary witch but by all means move it with my blessings i thank you for taking the time to rad my work and i apprecaite the reply lok foward to talking again soon
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Post by anirbas on Jan 5, 2009 16:50:38 GMT -6
It has a very spiritual quality to it...
But, then again, witches are quite spiritual...
But, no, being as the inspiration is a lone witch,
I'll not move it...Or, perhaps, we could post
it on both boards...All I know, is that I adored
the usage of both masculine and feminine "higher powers"...
Looking forward to seeing more of your work, Lady!
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Post by redrose on Jan 9, 2009 5:51:58 GMT -6
feel free to move it to wherever you feel it needs to be , it may take me a while to learn to figure out the best place for my work lol i hadnt given it to much thought im relly happy to hear what u liked about the piece
im also look foward to seeing your work in the near future im off to bed sooo tired
night
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Post by anirbas on Jan 15, 2009 0:28:16 GMT -6
okie dokie...I'd like you to leave it here and post it on the Philosophy, Spirituality, Religion
board, too...I can move the piece, but, it'll take it from here, if I do...if you copy and paste
it and then post it there, too, then it stays in both places...hope to see more of your work, soon...
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