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Post by sergosa on Jun 4, 2011 12:14:51 GMT -6
In my dreams I see a boiling river And a wobbly bridge across it. I can't go over this bridge To the other river bank. The birds, With eyes like the light bulbs, Fly menacingly above it. I look onto the river, bridge and flock. There are not emotions. I know. My day awaits me. I'll go over this bridge. But somebody would think: Another fearsome bird Flies to the other side.
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Post by moseley on Jun 7, 2011 3:24:57 GMT -6
for some reason, as i read this, Rodney Dangerfield was citing Dylan Thomas' "do not go gentle.." and I feel your conciliation of that sentiment was brilliant, especially the light bulb eye comparison, you have to be a stoic
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Post by sergosa on Jun 8, 2011 2:01:47 GMT -6
Thanks! I'll try! And thanks for reading and comment! S.
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Post by vulture on Jun 14, 2011 22:13:11 GMT -6
You know what? This poem makes me wish I had more than one *exalt* to bequeath per visit! I will be back to do so, later, of course!
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