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Post by sergosa on Jun 11, 2011 6:44:50 GMT -6
A light and a darkness Intertwined in lust - A fabulous act of a new day creation.
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Post by anirbas on Jun 17, 2011 19:06:58 GMT -6
Daybreak broken down into a sex act...lol... And it doesn't sound the least pornographic... It still sounds like a poem adoring Nature...
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Post by sergosa on Jun 18, 2011 2:25:19 GMT -6
Hi, dear lady! I write a lot but I think I'll never write porno ... Thanks for reading and kind comment! S.
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Post by heartfelt7 on Jun 18, 2011 8:49:07 GMT -6
Sergosa: This is absolutely beautiful. To me, you just wrote the shortest version for the equation for life: "intertwining darkness and light." Wow!
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Post by sergosa on Jun 18, 2011 9:16:02 GMT -6
Thank you so much! I like this piece. It came to me not long ago - my work, I have night shifts, allows me from time time go outdoor. And from a porch I adore starry sky, moon and daybreak ... And it came. S.
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