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"The raid." Jul 18, 2011 6:00:50 GMT -6

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Post by sergosa on Jul 18, 2011 6:00:50 GMT -6

Midnight, darkness, beginning.
Jagged torches flame.
Dreadful shades and blind faces.
Flooded with ruthless frenzy heads.
Scarlet light spots on predatory blades.
Dense with fury air.
Rapid stroke ... pain, pain, pain ... a spear ...

Not me, the others
Will loot the spoils.
I stayed forever in madness of
Midnight, darkness, beginning.

Last Edit: Jul 18, 2011 12:17:22 GMT -6 by sergosa

heartfelt7 Member Posts: 690	"The raid." Jul 18, 2011 8:44:08 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by heartfelt7 on Jul 18, 2011 8:44:08 GMT -6 Full of hidden meaning and mystery, Sergo. You are very good at that. Nice poem.

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"The raid."

Post by sergosa on Jul 18, 2011 6:00:50 GMT -6

Post by heartfelt7 on Jul 18, 2011 8:44:08 GMT -6

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