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Post by anirbas on Sept 22, 2011 23:06:38 GMT -6
Impending storms encroach upon the atmosphere
The air is laden with the heaviness of possibility and transformation
In this moment the storms rage and range miles away
While here, it is quiet... Quiet as a babe in the womb about to be born
Loud as the myriad mouths of the earth drawn drought wide and deep chanting singing praying dry voices agony twisted
Begging for a catalyst... Begging for moisture... For one chance more... To become something more than dirt...
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Post by sergosa on Sept 23, 2011 0:02:27 GMT -6
Wow! Powerful, very powerful work! Exalt. S. (R.Y.)
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Post by anirbas on Sept 23, 2011 0:06:27 GMT -6
(Big smile) Good evening, Sergosa! A treat to "see" you here, in "real" time! Thank you for the read, comments and exalt!
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Post by sergosa on Sept 23, 2011 0:24:20 GMT -6
Yep! Dear lady! Here just morning! Ha-ha! No worry! I always ready to serve you! Best regards, S. (R.Y.)
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Post by anirbas on Sept 29, 2011 23:27:38 GMT -6
That is good to know, Sir Grey and thank you. For who knows? There may come a day, I shall need to rely upon you for your loyalty...(spoken like lines from the old movies about court intrigue in the middle ages and such...haha)
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Post by moseley on Oct 2, 2011 11:19:32 GMT -6
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, that is a most masterful mudpie awaiting the breath of life...!
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Post by anirbas on Feb 1, 2012 22:49:58 GMT -6
Moseley, I did not realize you had commented on this mudpie of a poem...Thank you for the read and comment! I wondered if anyone would deduce the unspoken/unwritten last word of the poem was mud. Thought of adding it...Sounds as though you got it!
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