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Post by firestarfairy on Jul 9, 2012 23:23:06 GMT -6
If actions and words speak volumes then I have not spoken at all the word that have failed me they are here now
I love thee with all my heart I don't imagine my life without you I am scared that you are going to leave me and finding someone else to hold I miss beauty of laying within your arms and the tenderness of your touch I don't see me within your eyes I see your fear of the unknown Speaking to that fear that you have my heart, body and soul
My actions have failed your heart I am holding on with my all might this love for thee I will not let go until I am yours once more
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Post by anirbas on Jul 10, 2012 22:49:07 GMT -6
Intense!
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Post by firestarfairy on Jul 11, 2012 22:00:40 GMT -6
I know.
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Post by heartfelt7 on Jul 13, 2012 21:28:53 GMT -6
I love the lines in the first stanza "the words that have failed me, they are here now." That really is intense and grabs my attention for the rest of the poem. Very nice!!
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Post by firestarfairy on Jul 22, 2012 22:22:23 GMT -6
thanks heart felt... I am glad that it captured you.
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