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Post by aims on Aug 8, 2013 15:57:24 GMT -6
My love for her has faded to fondness and just when i thought i was all threw love held no enchantments anew again as if for the first time I saw you and I knew I never stopped I still love you you and your sweet smile so beguile you and your unself-conscious wit ensnared, captivated, enslaved I sit. You are the "IT" that gives my heart a fit. Yet, not goo goo eyes, nothing so childish or intense applies just a lingering love resting on my shoulder like a dove like a hand in a well worn glove. yet nothing to do I could never have you neither before nor now no declarations no vow just a little heart bow in recognition, of a sweet painless hopeless postion.
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Post by anirbas on Aug 8, 2013 18:08:17 GMT -6
Lovely rendition of unrequited love, now at peace...Beautiful. I loved it. Therefore, *EXALT!*
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Post by aims on Aug 9, 2013 17:53:09 GMT -6
Thank you!!!
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Post by moseley on Aug 12, 2013 21:43:33 GMT -6
the differences in unrequieted love though is the connection to the inner person who holds it...it is a silent thing, never spoken of, unless in poetry, then, it speaks somewhat to all of us in our way, a nod that we all are fallible in our construction this way, in our own way, because unrequieted love is personal, it is a true image of the person and therefore, like the person living life, it is one of the most durable things we carry with us, unlike a personality, unrequieted love is very close to the essence of what we really are, what we really need...infatuation on the other hand is only a momentary notice of that which we want, which changes like the weather...it is a lovely soul that can not only hold these feelings, but is willing to share and reveal them...such is the gift of a naked poet, giving us the eye into our own selves this way. AIMS you are a splendid naked poet!
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