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Post by anirbas on Mar 26, 2014 15:35:16 GMT -6
Above your loft apartment on the rooftop we sit Chinese take out cartons strewn between us we share with your placid tabby cat
Neon colors light our night paint our cheeks with a rainbow glow unseen traffic noise and the dusky notes of a saxophone wafting from an open window serenade our first kiss...
Then our next...
And our next...
My hair is bleached blonde my lips are blood red your face is smeared with duck sauce and vermillion
Tomorrow, you will still not know for sure, who I was that night... But, I will remember these moments long after you are gone and my golden hair has returned to auburn.
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Post by aims on Mar 26, 2014 20:50:41 GMT -6
exalt!!!!!
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Post by anirbas on Apr 2, 2014 17:26:35 GMT -6
Thanks millions, Amy. Trying to get back into the swing of writing, I've searched in odd places for my bemusement...LoL... This was actually a piece inspired from an eighties movie I was watching...Can you guess which one it might have been I was peering at?
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Post by phantasm on Apr 4, 2014 18:56:29 GMT -6
I have no idea what the movie was, was it a 'chick flick?' Not bad, btw. You've still got the writing bug.
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Post by anirbas on Apr 8, 2014 19:56:06 GMT -6
Well, not sure if it was considered a "chick flick" or not. I was doing an eighties inspired movie marathon...LoL...The movie that gave me the itch to write, was 'Desperately Seeking Susan', of all things. I was going for eighties comedy movies...Good to know you still consider me as having the writing bug. Sometimes, I wonder. I write so little these days. Of course, I didn't use to have a full time job, either...LoL...Thanks for the read, Dave.
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