that was it

[silver]

hark, hark broken heart
I hear your sorrow faintly
beating bleating pain

almost lost beneath
the waterfall roar of blood
rushing to my head

what was that she said?
that left me reeling brain dead
in my very tracks?

disappointment flooding
my mouth with the taste of iron
what was that she said?

he's mine. that was it.
 

[aims]

awesome! I love it!

[phantasm]

Just a dash of the literary.
Not bad, not bad at all.

[silver]

Thank you both, so very much.

[anirbas]

Bump.