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Post by anirbas on Aug 5, 2018 21:12:15 GMT -6
Oh, the horror! This, then, my end of days? Finally, I've become a veritable wallflower? I stare at you, wide eyed, inviting your gaze. How dare you never notice nor look my way?
Why, you act as though I am not even here! Unless I toss a book or a lamp in your direction. Succeeding only in making you quickly vacate the room. Oh, it's so hard to be flirtatious when one is a ghost!
But, at least I'm not a loudmouthed banshee!
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Post by darkness0within on Aug 9, 2018 6:58:58 GMT -6
It's funny how relationships become comfortable over time. And you know I've always thought the best way to change it is to have a sense of humour. Has to go both ways though... Throwing book on standby.
Great write anirbas!
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Post by anirbas on Aug 9, 2018 14:26:11 GMT -6
"It's funny how relationships become comfortable over time. And you know I've always thought the best way to change it is to have a sense of humour. Has to go both ways though... Throwing book on standby.
Great write anirbas!"
Thanks for your read and comments, Darkness.
I am often inspired by other poets, writers, nature, books, movies and or series available through streaming and television. 'Tonic-Clonic Love Spell', for instance. I was initially inspired by Amy's latest love angst offerings and her romantic plight and my empathy for her unrequited situation. But, haven't we all felt that way, at some point? Universal.
This piece was somewhat inspired by your 'Of Demons'. I enjoy channeling a subject and/or an entity, etc... and writing what I feel from that perspective, too. Which, is exactly what I did with this piece.
I was in here reading the other night and found myself bemused to dash off the above piece, off the cuff, at the keyboard.I chose to channel a female ghost, beautiful and flirtatious in life, now invisible. For the first time, in death if not life, understanding what it feels like to be ignored. A universal feeling for we mere, normal looking folks. She, the ghost, is crushing on, in love with, a living man...And the only way she can get his attention is to scare the bejeebers out of him...
I couldn't figure out where to put it...I initially meant it for the Dark board. But, it didn't end up scary. And the Fantasy board didn't seem quite right either. After the damn bitch ghost I channeled turned out to be a romantic...gigglegigglegiggle...So, I put it here. After first typing it up on the Dark board, off the cuff.
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Post by darkness0within on Aug 15, 2018 6:57:20 GMT -6
It's funny... I just saw this write in a completely different way to how you intended anirbas.
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Post by anirbas on Aug 15, 2018 19:05:23 GMT -6
It's funny... I just saw this write in a completely different way to how you intended anirbas. That's what I love about poetry, Darkness. A poem is like a painting. Every one viewing it/reading it sees the piece from a different angle. And almost always, sees something different. Perhaps,even far different than was initially intended by the poet or the painter. That is the magic of poetry. I like that you shared what you thought it implied, and gave me the opportunity to see my own piece from a different angle through another's eyes. And I could so see it. The ghost as a metaphor for being ignored. Or feeling ignored. I usually leave the mystery as to what I was trying to do with a piece, a mystery. But, you were the one reader I was so sure would get it, right off the bat... Hehe. So, I had to share my creative inspiration with you.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 1, 2019 20:12:55 GMT -6
~My Treasure
I desire you Admire you from the near distance of my clear glass casket as you pace across the floor distracted lost in the thoughts of the ages
Would that I could rise Hold your gaze with my fine dark eyes trapped in one of various canopic jars across the room over there along with my liver lungs stomach and entrails
Though my heart lies cradled in my chest and it beats for you my beloved professor of Egyptian archaeology I've made up my mind as you continue to stride your study I'm coming for you my hands are clumsy wrapped with linen strips I manage to raise the lid of my glass coffin none the less
You may turn around now my treasure I'm right behind you Hope you don't mind my bad breath it's been a while since I've brushed my teeth centuries no less...
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Post by anirbas on Sept 4, 2019 21:59:06 GMT -6
Oh, hell's yesss! Feeling the Halloween in my bones! After all, the entire month of September is Halloween Eve!
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Post by anirbas on Sept 12, 2019 12:39:02 GMT -6
~There's That
At the office I see you everyday Clean crisp and handsome in your three piece suit and fine leather shoes
I long to engage you to say in the milieu of conversation My my you look good enough to eat But I'm shy and you never notice me
I'm on the small side with hirsute arms Huge gold eyes red lips and big white teeth Beauty has not blessed me with myriad charms But I can smell your bergamot and sandalwood
Cologne for miles and miles and miles Especially once a month when the moon is full It is that night I grow assertive and powerful Four paws with claws on the ground running
Ranging far and wide in an effort to avoid you Rapacious with hunger glowing in my big gold eyes I cannot cannot cannot see you on this night It would give you a tremendous fright
Plus, I'd eat you. There's that. So in the scenery of your life I will remain My love unrequited and painful to carry in my heart Watching you from the sidelines licking my lips
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