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Post by silver on Aug 17, 2018 20:51:11 GMT -6
this stone is unique it's a message in a bottle though barely larger than a pebble
this stone is special meant only for you my friend placed in your palm will you understand?
this stone is a bridge I dare you to cross over even as I dare myself to do so
this stone is an adventure that begins when placed in your hand will you kiss me or skip it across a pond?
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Post by aims on Aug 17, 2018 21:01:27 GMT -6
Oh, I love this one, if it were me you were writing to< I'd do both!!!! I love skipping rocks!!!
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Post by silver on Aug 18, 2018 16:40:39 GMT -6
Thank you for the read and comments, Aims.
Laughing at your ending, didn't think of it ending that way. And it being a positive ending.
The original intention was that if the stone was kept, the message was understood and accepted. If the stone was tossed, it was not...
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Post by darkness0within on Aug 19, 2018 12:49:59 GMT -6
This stone is a heart. This stone are your feelings, This stone is a daydream, This stone has many meanings. Excellent write Silver.
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Post by silver on Aug 31, 2018 20:24:47 GMT -6
"This stone is a heart. This stone are your feelings, This stone is a daydream, This stone has many meanings."
~Darkness.
Exactly. As many meanings, as a face's expressions. Thank you for your read and comments, Darkness. But, most of all, thank you for sharing a poetical offering, too. I call them offerings as when we share a piece, does it not feel as though one is offering yourself, or your creation up to the reader to be born beyond oneself?
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Post by anirbas on Sept 3, 2024 16:53:13 GMT -6
Bbbbbbbbbumpppppppp.
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