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Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2018 19:22:19 GMT -6
I suppose I know that you want me to forget you. I still question your way of sending that message. Being an asshole the way you were was completely unnecessary, and I would have listened to what you had to say had you just come to me honestly in the first place.
you didn't
do that
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would I even have listened? no, I likely would have covered my ears and sat there in denial, insisting that we still had a chance. yet and still, even if that were the case you still shouldn't have done what you did. ...
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you didn't even say goodbye.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2018 19:52:06 GMT -6
Forget who? (times two)
I know that I won't ever forget The times we had; unmistakable regret fills my soul til I'm ready to drown realizing how far I've fallen down.
I've gone through every stage of grief And never once was it ever brief; Some took months or years at a time; it's taken forever for my thoughts to unwind.
but finally, now, my mind is untangled Won't lie, I thought I'd rather be strangled than to endure this painful journey of sizzling shock, and anger burning;
Yet now I find I've accepted the loss Knowing damn well I'm paying the cost For every dream I stored in you; my love, my lemon, heart stained blue.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 7, 2018 19:57:38 GMT -6
Pensive, poignant and lovely.
"my love, my lemon, heart stained blue."
Lovely. Just lovely.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 7, 2018 19:59:42 GMT -6
Pensive, poignant and lovely. "my love, my lemon, heart stained blue." Lovely. Just lovely. Thanks. It took a lot of trial and error to get that line how I wanted it to be. ^-^
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Post by darkness0within on Sept 8, 2018 13:49:48 GMT -6
I agree with anirbas cat plant... Excellent piece's my friend.
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Post by silver on Feb 18, 2019 21:32:38 GMT -6
Bump.
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Post by anirbas on Mar 7, 2019 21:55:47 GMT -6
You're welcome, mi comadre. Your pieces always show a strong sense of forethought and creative awareness.
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