personification of... something

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whisper, whisper, into my ear
tell me the things i don't want to hear
tell me i have no purpose here
yes, whisper, dear, into my ear.

breathe, breathe, breathe all of my air
twist your sick fingers around my hair
exhale your poison, everywhere
just breathe, darling. take my air.

she'll squeeze, indeed, she'll squeeze out my life
laughing and crying, her internal strife
she'll steal, darling, you steal from my life
my will to live, she replaced with a knife!

she needs to die, i can't stand her words
but that's not the way it shall be
when all's said and done, and worse comes to worst
she's only a part of me.

[anirbas]

*CLAP! CLAP! CLAP!*

Both internal and external rhymes!!! Divine how effortlessly it spilled through my head and off of my tongue,
when I read it the second time, out loud to myself. Always a treat when you slip in and take a seat, Cat.

[darkness0within]

Ah... The inner demon of the mind whispers its poisoned words.

A very well balanced write Cat.

And it flows very well... An excellent piece. 

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thank you for the kind words!

[moseley]

she is such a changling something like breathing, you can't do much without it(her)