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Post by DavidMc on Feb 22, 2007 10:34:29 GMT -6
Inbetween
What happens when you close your eyes?
Do you see what I see?
I see people I have never met,
nameless images projected
on my inner screen
It's not quite reality
nor a dream ...
It's inbetween ...
The state that knows no name
Is your mind composed of subtle colours?
the teal of green or ocean blue
Do you dream my inbetween?
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Post by bichsa on Feb 22, 2007 12:05:19 GMT -6
Yes I believe I do for I see an image of all of you from your words ,I see your souls.nice piece Dave As always ,peace C.
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Post by anirbas on Mar 6, 2007 22:03:20 GMT -6
David! This is wonderful! Can't believe I missed it!
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Post by ingradreams on Mar 6, 2007 22:54:14 GMT -6
gosh, David,
This poem has more hidden meaning with each
succesive reading.
You really have left alot hidden inbetwwen its lines.
And it's all wonderous. Profound.
Very clever of you.
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Post by DavidMc on Mar 7, 2007 13:18:50 GMT -6
I believe we are slowly developing 'our sixth sense' Women are more naturally tuned in than are Men.
Thank you for the comments.
David.
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Post by cousin Itt on Jun 1, 2007 16:49:34 GMT -6
oh my stars, David !
your poem is charming!
we women have only been pretending to be
more tuned-in than you men. that way we can
make you keep believing that we know something
you don't. like, knowing what you're thinking only by
the way you're acting. that sneaky smile on your face
right now tells all at this moment. see? knew what you
were thinking after all.
anyway, very nice piece of literary talent.
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Post by Thing on Jun 1, 2007 22:10:39 GMT -6
I'm assuming you're implying you're female, It. In which case, you should speak for yourself. Not all women are game players, as the above analogy would imply that you are.
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Post by cousin Itt on Jun 2, 2007 10:12:19 GMT -6
not a game player at all.
sorry for the mis-understanding, Thing.
please excuse me for confusing my point.
i meant that we women do have the ability
to see through men's facade of playing innocent.
not that they are guilty for anything wrong, but they
don't really get it when we read them clearly so often.
tell a man a pun about a woman, any pun at all. let's say,
like blond jokes for instance. and there is this sly, sneaky
smile that they get. my husband was the same way. but what
they might like to know is their sly smile and most of their actions
are a give-away. not that they're being disrespectful, or trying
to hide something. it's just that, if they do try to hide something,
it only makes us more aware that they are.
when I was writing that response to David, i was sitting at my
cousin's computer; he had just seen what i first wrote, and
was trying to contain his laughter. trying to keep it to that
sneaky smile of his. so i wrote the second part, but that
blurred my meaning. at that time, i knew he just tried to
hide my birthday present and cake. which i thought
was so cute; my cousin trying to surprise me, when
the cake he had baked smelled up the whole kitchen.
no fair! the aroma of the strawberry pudding birthday
cake he baked was driving me nuts, it smelled so good.
i was trying to let him think that he was about to surprise me,
when the surprise was that he remembered my birthday on his own
to begin with. my husband never did.
but my new fiance does, and the biggest surprise of all was when
he showed at my cousin's front door after my cousin had arranged
to get him here from the air force base in Florida that my fiance is
stationed at. that one got me good. so some men do actually get it
when we women look like we are stuck in that in-between state
that David's poem is written about.
i'm glad that you spoke up, Thing. i agree, not all women
are game players; niether are all men.
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Post by anirbas on Jun 3, 2007 15:03:15 GMT -6
So, you really are related to our NImsical! How enchanting to have two of you from the same family in here!!! One man has remembered my birthday, but I've not married him, to date...LOL...Perhaps that is why he remembers my birthday? ggglgggl...Hope you are enjoying your visit with us and will continue to drop by and see us...You have to ignore Thing...Probably Thing hadn't had it's Thing snacks yet...[dodges flying things from Thing's desk]
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Post by cousin Itt on Jun 3, 2007 18:58:23 GMT -6
yep! Jeff's cousin. that's me.
or is it that he's my cousin, not
me being his cousin. took me a
while to get the name 'nims' and what
it means. now i see the reasoning behind it.
Jeff's wonderful to be around. a real
nut, and so happy. but i've seen him
go off on his own in the back yard to
think and be by himself. i cannot get
the kook to open up about what was
the story behind why Ingra left. i met
her once. very sweet girl. and she
seemed to really love Jeff with all her heart.
So now he spends a lot of time alone or
asleep. hope he's really and truly o.k.
oh and about the comments by 'Thing';
i'm very glad that person had spoken up.
it let me clear up my confusing message.
This site is so much fun ! thank you for the
welcome and hospitality. lots of of excellent
writing going on in here. please, keep it going !!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by anirbas on Jun 4, 2007 9:32:22 GMT -6
You're very welcome, Cuz. And thank you for what you said about our little site. We, David and I, like to think we've some of the bestest poets on the planet contributing poetical works of art here.
Yes, your Jeff, and our Nims, LOL, is a wonderful human to be around, and one of my dearest cyber fweends. And imho, Ingra lost out when she walked out on him, for whatever reasons. But, I don't want to speak ill of her, as she is a sweet girl and so I won't. Takes time to heal from a broken heart, Cuz...Your Jeff will bounce back, eventually.
Enjoy yourself wandering the halls, lots of word paintings lining the walls...Nir aka Sabrina.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Jun 4, 2007 18:31:26 GMT -6
aw Sabrina
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Your comments to my cousin Elise are so sweet
and she'll see them when she and her loved-one Adam
return from their short trip down to Branson, MO.
As for me...I'm doing better and better each day
and Life moves forward into one glorious adventure
after another...so time for some Jubilation and Celebration !
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Post by anirbas on Jun 5, 2007 14:46:16 GMT -6
Good to know, mi amigo...That you are bettering...Elise...What a charming name...You read my mind...I was wondering what her name was the last time I was in...She's welcome to hang out with us, anytime. Your last paragraph, also perfectly describes how I feel about Life now, too...Good to feel that way...Instead of like you want to drown yourself in a toilet out of desperation...Question: Can one, give oneself a whirlie? Or is that logistically impossible?  Giggling my way out of the box and off the forum for the moment, only...Ya'll take care! Nir. |
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