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Post by ingradreams on Mar 8, 2007 19:19:20 GMT -6
this piece is one of my favorite prayer-poems by nimbusGLOW he has given me permission to put any one of his pieces that I wish to post into a forum (ones he hasn't already posted)so (we) offer this one as a gift for all of you and as his first reply to all your healing prayers. (once again I use his easy-to-follow directions to do this)
CHERISHED PARADIGM
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through my inner cherished paradigm I sincerely embrace this view ...
GOD is the Divine ...
the nuance presence abundance quintessence of all Creation ...
pure perfect pristine precious Divine Power .
ideal brilliant genuine definitive Divine Truth .
Alpha Omega ultimate absolute Divine Being ...
beyond all yet within all Infinity as all ...
the glorified omni-spirit-substance of Existence itself
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forever and yet at once infinite self intimate friend ...
verve through all source for all truly of all ...
GOD GODDESS masculine feminine Divine Expression .
holy sacred distinct reverent Divine Esteem .
sincere profound essential authentic Divine Principle ...
in this gift of true admiration my inner cherished paradigm ...
I thus honor adore worship treasure .
the exalted omni-essence of Love itself
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nimbusGLOW 2005
There. after a few whacks at it with much careful effort this piece now belongs to all of you for your own use. a gift of devotion from us.Love to you as always 'Ingee' and 'Jeffee'
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Post by anirbas on Mar 9, 2007 12:53:50 GMT -6
Thank you for sharing it, Ingee.
It is beautiful in it's flow and beat... I've had the chance to read this one at an alternate universe.
Hope you and Jeffee...haha...That's funny...Are bettering today... Both of you resting and sharing quiet, healing moments...
I'm headed out to get dirt under my fingernails doing some gardening...
Ya'll take care and blessed be. Sabrina.
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Post by ingradreams on Apr 1, 2007 12:27:01 GMT -6
thank you, Beloved for your comment on my posting of your poem here. The cool tricks you've shown me to make posting poems much better really do come in handy.
'Nims', I felt this had to be seen and read for others to grasp, so they might sense an understanding the 'Divine' in their own special way.
By the way, I've never felt your 'visual cues and pauses' (your description) were ever distracting. Not at all. Actually they add to the meaning of your poetry, and guide readers through your thought process. And sometimes, are part of a poem's voice. (they also make you unique).
Please, just keep being you.
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