Love prophecy

[anna3]

Sunken by you
For ever
I became a shell
Listening with attention,waiting,
For the high tide
You would tackle me
Inside you
Relishing
The magnitude of your love
My ocean
The most ubiquitous



Every road
Which takes me away
From you
Is incorrect
Every moment
Even the merriest
Far from you
Is lost
Because only you are
My source of love
And my happiness
The most essential



So I wait
Turning back
From the incorrect roads
Which I tread
Wanting for a moment
To get away
From your power
In vain
When the Moon also
Prompts me the words,
That I'm yours
How could I
Not believe it?
When even my heart
Laughs
Into the sweetest
Prophecy
How could I
Distrust my heart
Which screams
For You, and it knows
That it is you!

[DavidMc]

Very Romantic poem.. with beautiful use of metaphor and image

Excellent poem

David.

[anna3]

Thank you It's some old one but still like it somehow I see me walking at night when all these thoughts grows up to this poem and i see the man who was inspiration to this and smile still

Thank you again for your kind comment

[anirbas]

Hail and welcome to the 'Seasons, Anna. Fine work. Got more? So good to see someone
besides myself and a few furry boyz ginning and spinning poeming in here...*LOL*...
I was beginning to think I was all alone in here, the only girl... So, you're poetical entrance,
was doubly enjoyed by me! Sabrina

[anna3]

Thank you for comment Sabrina and nice to meet you Yes I'll send some more I think Just will look around a bit
Hugs
Anna

[anirbas]

You're very welcome! Feel free to look around and poem at whim and will,
and as inspired to do so, Anna. Since you've landed, our female population
has increased! Blessings followed in your wake...Now, we have the opposite
problem...Lots of lady poets...Only four, I think, gentlemen poets...LOL...
Hugz backatcha, Anna. Nir.

[nimbusGLOW]

Oh Yes...mmhhmm...this one is sheer brilliance!
it has a lightness-quality...and yet it also has a deep-empowerment.
nicely done, anna...HAIL TO THEE !

'NIM's