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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 16, 2006 21:20:03 GMT -6
(Please see re-worded re-formatted versions of this thead's poems.)
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Post by shell on Sept 17, 2006 10:49:42 GMT -6
oozing with sensuality this conjoined poem (i so love this about your way - it truly expresses how you receive words/voices) moves from we to i to she and then back into we. Hearts know truly that "sacrosanct is the space between empty and full" (a slight paraphrase there, i know) ... it is where we are when we are at our best ... utterly divine, you lovely soul you!
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 18, 2006 1:43:18 GMT -6
(Please see re-worded re-formatted versions)
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 18, 2006 10:31:23 GMT -6
(Please see re-worded re-formatted versions)
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Post by vixen on Sept 19, 2006 10:18:24 GMT -6
an absolutely marvelous piece. Think I am going to borrow this sometime...talk about mood setting. awesome vixen
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Post by anirbas on Sept 19, 2006 20:44:57 GMT -6
Sensual poeming at it's best...Teases and taunts without sounding like hard core porn...Excellent work, Jeffrey! I stand in awe of your finesse. Sabrina.
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 19, 2006 20:54:11 GMT -6
Thank You...both of you...
vixen, I've enjoyed and continue to re-read your work...very intriquing flair and 'color' you express.
Sabrina, I too am in awe of YOUR work...as always... I hope you realize how clear your 'verse-voice' is herein...how much you add to this choir.
Please...pretty please...with raspberry icing on it...both of you... poem on...on...on...on...!
Jeffrey
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 6, 2006 0:34:47 GMT -6
(Please see re-worded re-formatted versions)
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