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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 18, 2006 1:27:48 GMT -6
ELATION AND FULFILLMENT
open
your mind
your heart
your being
that I would be
enfolded
within the cocoon
of you
and know the Heaven
of your profound Love
open
yourself
your need
your want
that I would be
enchanted
through the magnetism
of you
and absorb the power
of your neoteric energy
open
your eyes
your arms
your legs
that I would be
enraptured
by the amaranthine
of you
and share the wonder
of your desirous passion
find Sanctuary
in my embrace
feel Paradise
in my touch
sense Nirvana
in my kiss
open to me
in confidence
that I may glide
my solid scepter
slow...gentle...deep
into your femme passageway
and pulse my movements
to the rhythm
of pleasure's breath
come with me
in unison
that we may ascend
in the contentment
of being divinely
melded together
and attain the
atmospheric elevation
of shared pinnacle
lay beside me
in Elysium-Clouds
that we may gaze
into the euphoria
of each other's stare
and behold the epitome
of
Elation
and
Fulfillment
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 18, 2006 2:07:36 GMT -6
this one was completed on my birthday in 2000...
well...with this year's bithday near...I felt this to be a good time to share it...
as of yet, I had kept it (and the rest of my erotic, sensually esoteric pieces)
completely private...then I posted the PARADISE THRESHOLD poem on here
which helped me in opening my doorway-to-trust.
So...here I'm offering more of them...one by one...to this forum
in the hope that they are afforded a sense of honor to their intent...
and offer a gift of inspiration to those of you who view them.
splendor to all...
'NIM'-ness
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 18, 2006 10:00:46 GMT -6
PUREST AIR
I called to you
you replied
now I have you suffused
into Dream
I hoped for you
you promised
thus I am immersed
within Assurance
you have charmingly become
my own Intimate Shawl
entwined about me
in our Lovers' Rapture-Embrace
and for my survival
the Essence you exude
is become the Purest Air
I shall ever breathe through Passion
Air
Life
Love
You
...
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Post by glenn on Sept 18, 2006 12:42:01 GMT -6
nicely crafted poem
bravo!
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Post by shell on Sept 19, 2006 10:29:14 GMT -6
ohhh my, Nim ... this trilogy of poems is exquisitely sensual, erotic and so *right in spirit. It's also pretty "hot" if you don't mind my saying so ... *looks for air con switch*
I adore the intimacy, even in the second where the lovers know each other from soul touch perhaps, rather than direct meeting. Actually i often think that when energy meets and recognises another this is more intimate than falling over each other in a noisy club ... but then i am strange like that *grin
The devotional core of these poems is supremely gentle, eloquent and so what souls desire ... plus that irresistible hint of mischief that sparkles too!
Absolutely brilliant swoon-worthy heartwriting, Nim ...
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 20, 2006 12:41:56 GMT -6
DREAM-TIME-SEQUENCE
dream-Time-sequence
movements on a visionary theme
mirrored-motion sessions
in our Love-making
equaled in their rhythm
through the two of us
...
please do continue
...
dream-Time-sequence
movements of our Amour ballet
deep-breath-engulfed pauses
in our Passion-sharing
offered to our rapture
within the both of us
...
prithee do fulfill
...
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 27, 2006 2:18:56 GMT -6
TIME'S LOVE...LOVE'S TIME
my Angel...there have been
hushed moments of Time
when I truly thought
you were Time itself
...
Time's Love
Love's Time
...
there are many moments
even now when with you
that I feel a sensation of
Time as a 'linear language'
a language not shared as such
yet a language realized in 'stasis'
the language of our gradual osmosis
as The Continuum melds with Pure Being
any language deeply personal in its nature
that we telepathically experience all at once
for Time's passing is superfluous within
the unison-wash of Love's timelessness
and Time's vastness is still un-charted in our
attempts 'fold' its non-linear ethereal expanse
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Post by shell on Sept 27, 2006 6:15:44 GMT -6
This so got my mind buzzing! Time as a pure concept, maybe with a spirit of its own (everything has spirit, i believe - though do not know) so we connect with time rather than exist within it, and of course there really is little difference and it all becomes a linguistic attempt to touch or glimpse a fraction of what we FEEL .... and in Love we do feel it all ... awesome conceptual writing, dearest Nim, that is exploring every facet of the gem that is relationship ... (which would be all of it .. again ... aarrgghh! lol)
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Post by anirbas on Sept 28, 2006 9:44:53 GMT -6
Wonderous word dancing, Nimster...One of the few men, I know, that not only writes romance poetry, but does so with skill...You're in good company, one of three I think capable of daring the romance waters...
And oh my god, Shell and NIms...I LOVED the collab you guyz put together!!!!!!!
IIIII-EEEEEE...Heck of a poetical show! Sounded like you guys were in an Eisteddfodd event, hundreds of years ago! Or, rather, it read that way...And sounded that way when I read it aloud to myself at the entity...With Sissie staring at me, like I'd lost my blithering mind...Sissie is my sothic companion and Ivy's four legged ugly sister...hehe...
Take care all of you guys and don't forget to poem on! Nir
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Post by vixen on Sept 28, 2006 16:24:00 GMT -6
Nim, absolutely extroridinary!!! You have a unique way of making your reader feel your passion. I know that soulds wierd,but these beautiful love poems pull you into them and for a moment you are there feeling all the passion, excitement, breathlessness and I KNOW that not my hot flashes talking. I would write a replying poem, but I do not have that much talent, anything I could do would pale in comparison. Vixen
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 28, 2006 18:02:38 GMT -6
shell...
nir...
vix...
my honored friends...
All of your comments are so deeply moving...and it seems each of you
completely understood the connotation and felt my intent...but then
all of you are SSOOOO good at that. You each seem to be able to
'read' me like a book with transparent pages. I so LOVE that!
Love...dear ones...
'NIM'
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 6, 2006 1:19:33 GMT -6
To all of you...
I've just returned to read
your loving responses...
My words simply
cannot express
the uplifting
quaility of
what you
have said
to me in
here.
Your kindness
is so deeply felt
and so peacefully
accepted and loved.
'NIM's
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