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Post by DavidMc on Jan 2, 2007 10:22:29 GMT -6
All About Love.
When we talk about love we have to talk about all love not just the love we have paid our subscription to..
I hated my father but somewhere in the night I cried out and said I love you!
Talking of love is the hardest thing. Because it's devalued by the very word
I love T.V. I love pizza !
But what do we really love really?
When we strip away the conditions what is left to love?
Do you love your wife or husband? But I guess you love your child.
Many say that God is love. In the night I cried out 'God I love you!' but I still felt alone...
I wanted a warm body to love to curl into my abdomen
I'm just all cried out on the word.
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Post by anirbas on Jan 2, 2007 10:54:25 GMT -6
Beautiful...Haunting...I know how you feel...For what it's worth, you're not alone...
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Post by rrw on Jan 2, 2007 11:59:47 GMT -6
You pose an interesting question... although, for me, "I love Pizza" really is more than a cliche to me. I DO LOVE PIZZA! If I wear a pizza, I'd marry one of me... with pepperoni and mushrooms. ;D But I digress. Good poem and love (or the lack of) is what poetry is all about. It may be the single reason why poetry was invented in the first place. Your write has inspired me. Great job.
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Post by vixen on Jan 2, 2007 13:33:46 GMT -6
Haunting is right. Love is an awesome concept.I think the word is overused. We like pizza, whats wrong with like. Think we should do that more, but love the poem.lol Always Vixen
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Post by dawness on Jan 3, 2007 6:51:21 GMT -6
the question is.... how do we love??? sterling insights, david. thanks
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Post by DavidMc on Jan 5, 2007 18:49:54 GMT -6
Love is the great enigma a four letter word that can pierce like a sword or haunt ... as a stigma.....
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Post by netfolk on Jan 6, 2007 23:17:51 GMT -6
nice work david,
In the night I cried out 'God I love you!' but I still felt alone...
this was really great and defines the essence of this write for me, saying it doesn't always 'cut it', you have to truly feel it (although pizza has worked for me from time to time lol).
Much enjoyed as always.
peace, Bernie
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Post by DavidMc on Jan 8, 2007 14:06:07 GMT -6
Your 'Pizza' must have had a great 'Topping'
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