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Sarah
Sept 20, 2006 3:15:34 GMT -6
Post by anna3 on Sept 20, 2006 3:15:34 GMT -6
I am Sarah , drowsy and wet
To worship his deity
On different ways
I am woman trippant
World right next to
Leaving remembrance
I am a cloud which the wind
Propels over the ground
I am a shadow which you touch
And I disappear
Because I do not exist for you
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Sarah
Sept 24, 2006 5:07:08 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Sept 24, 2006 5:07:08 GMT -6
the language of silence... wow!  |
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Sarah
Sept 24, 2006 22:36:19 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 22:36:19 GMT -6
I love the way you paint visuals and emotions with words, Anna...got more?
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Sarah
Sept 25, 2006 0:54:39 GMT -6
Post by michaellasalle on Sept 25, 2006 0:54:39 GMT -6
You finished this piece to perfection..
yet i feel so much pain
coming from the heart..beautifull heartbreaking...
thank you for sharing.. mike
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Sarah
Sept 26, 2006 3:00:11 GMT -6
Post by anna3 on Sept 26, 2006 3:00:11 GMT -6
Thank you all my friends here You always brings new smiles on my face |
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Sarah
Sept 26, 2006 7:50:55 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Sept 26, 2006 7:50:55 GMT -6
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Sarah
Sept 27, 2006 6:10:47 GMT -6
Post by shell on Sept 27, 2006 6:10:47 GMT -6
This is so very dreamy and mystic ... the essence of woman, cloud and maybe even Gaia too ... the invisibility and fragility of this is what gives it such Power ... awesome writing, Anna!
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Sarah
Sept 27, 2006 7:18:13 GMT -6
Post by anna3 on Sept 27, 2006 7:18:13 GMT -6
Thank you Shell Yes we are all sometimes as a one big mistery I'm glad you like it Have a nice day |
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Sarah
Oct 1, 2006 9:39:19 GMT -6
Post by kathylynn on Oct 1, 2006 9:39:19 GMT -6
Very well done. Could feel suspense in this write
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