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Post by anna3 on Sept 20, 2006 3:17:18 GMT -6
I swung with branches A tree without roots Free in space Summoning it to flight With every day Its crown grows Liberated by the pressure Of the corset of youth They would rustle so So loudly Summoning its lover Who it lives for Who it dances for The wild dance of nature Among the rocky hills Together with the wind Playing on the waves Melodie bursts of passion I call You My lover Among the night I call You The hum of the wind I call You The scream of the storm You would crash There on the island Where I wait If you want I will be a willow To be able to Wreathe You 's shoulders So that You could hear The melody of the bird's wings Fluttering among the branches
If you want I will be a rock Where You will reach Looking for refuge After a long cruise If I could To take You in Exposing all the caves In which you could fall asleep You could be a discoverer You could wander Over pulsating valleys and hills You could conquer all the hilltops You could find the roads to fiery cave And I will feel Your every movement You will touch me With the sounds of music Which you will feel in your heart You will be the pianist Which will play on me The song awakening to the life I call to You My Dear Standing on the rocks , Gazing at the Ocean Dressed in a gown Of gossamer and fog And with a necklace of morning dew You would arrive to marry me Because I'm Your goddess Sailor I call hopeful That you will land on the island Where I wait
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 21, 2006 5:41:13 GMT -6
Standing on the rocks , Gazing at the Ocean Dressed in a gown Of gossamer and fog And with a necklace of morning dew
You evoke some stunning imagery in this piece Anna. The above is my particular favourite. Delicious as always.
David
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Post by anna3 on Sept 21, 2006 12:17:05 GMT -6
Thank you David for always so nice words to me
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Post by dawness on Sept 22, 2006 2:48:12 GMT -6
endearing, anna! --- don't tire my soul waiting on the bench for many more morns wishing for your return
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Post by anirbas on Sept 22, 2006 21:57:06 GMT -6
*CLAP! CLAP! CLAP!* Way to go, Anna! Chockful of visuals and romantic yearning...Loved the entire piece, but these last lines, banged a gong in me...Anyway, got more? Nir. "Because I'm Your goddess Sailor I call hopeful That you will land on the island Where I wait" ~fragmentation of Anna verse. Loverly...Just absolutely loverly, lady...
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Post by anna3 on Sept 23, 2006 3:33:04 GMT -6
Thank you so much I love your hunger for more Anirbas
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