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Post by vixen on Sept 20, 2006 7:13:05 GMT -6
I cannot recall how it began
This love I have for you
I should have ran
You flirted with me. Why?
You made me want you
It was an emotional high.
It was just your game
Your sadistic joke
To make me tame
I fulfilled your need
I fell for you
Your warnings I did not heed
I would have wore your ring
I truly did not believe
I was just your plaything
Now I know I was just your pawn
Why do I want you back?
I should be glad you're gone.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 20, 2006 7:28:24 GMT -6
Wow, lady...Great offering...Universal...I was having an "I know that's right" moment reading it...I wish I could lobotomize some of my own memories... Just wipe 'em right out of my mind...So, I could comfortably get on with what's real in life...Survival not romance...LOL...Got more? Nir.  |
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Post by DavidMc on Sept 24, 2006 12:18:13 GMT -6
Bitingly honest write. A poem with real teeth!
David
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Post by vixen on Sept 24, 2006 14:49:04 GMT -6
Thanks ,both of you. Lately my life has been one of those "thats right moments" its amazing the torture we will put ourselves through in the name of love. Vixen
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Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 22:51:23 GMT -6
...i know that's right, lady...oh, how i know that's right...blessed be, though...what would the world be, without we romantic idiots, sweets? bland and boring, that's what...the upside to a world without romantic idiots...we'd not be experiencing a population explosion anywhere in the world...lol...or some such rot, designed to make ya giggle, Vix...my question is: why do we fall for the bad boys, even when we think we aren't? lol...you don't have to answer that... there isn't an answer...and perhaps, that's best...lol...or we'd not be experiencing a population explosion anywhere in the world...LOL...thinking i'm so dratted funny, slipping off the page in a giggle fit, and hoping i made you laugh, in my wake, Vix... nightienight sweets...better days and ways for us both, yes? or some such rot...Nir  |
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Post by michaellasalle on Sept 25, 2006 0:50:35 GMT -6
oh the pain you express in this piece
cuts into the readers heart..
loves deception is truly a fitting name..
my blessings, mike
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