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Sept 23, 2006 19:13:13 GMT -6
Post by amycando on Sept 23, 2006 19:13:13 GMT -6
Dreamer Hello Red I wish you were in my bed seeing inside my head feeling inside my heart with me in my days from finish to start. I want you at my side on top below inside.
Hello Red I wish I was in your bed seeing inside your head feeling inside your heart with you in your days from finish to start. I want to be at your side on top below inside.
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Sept 24, 2006 12:21:18 GMT -6
Post by DavidMc on Sept 24, 2006 12:21:18 GMT -6
Nice poem Amy, I much enjoyed reading.
David
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Sept 24, 2006 14:45:18 GMT -6
Post by vixen on Sept 24, 2006 14:45:18 GMT -6
Very nice Amy. It was a wonderful lilt to it. Great job <smiles> Vixen
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Sept 24, 2006 22:39:27 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 22:39:27 GMT -6
Romantic and whimsical! Who could ask for more of a romance poem? Nir
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Sept 25, 2006 0:52:53 GMT -6
Post by michaellasalle on Sept 25, 2006 0:52:53 GMT -6
.. a true reflection of whirlwind romance caught by desires....This is a fantastic piece in its expression!!.. very well written, take care,mike
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Dec 19, 2006 3:16:48 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Dec 19, 2006 3:16:48 GMT -6
as red as you are; this thrills me.
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