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Post by vixen on Sept 24, 2006 20:30:43 GMT -6
He’s My Destiny
My heart sees him in my minds eye Not his features, nor his face I see the poetry written in his soul His passion enthralls me Quickens my heart, steals my breath The love he is capable of scares me to death
So I will pray to the good Lord above God please guide him to me Let me hear his voice whisper on the wind Hear his joy in the giggle of a child Receive his gentleness in a baby’s sleepy sigh Feel his spirit as I watch an eagle fly
God I will know him when you bring him to me He will be the one who understands That at times I need the chocolate cheesecake Or a solitary walk along the lake There will be times when he says everything wrong And that I cry over sappy old songs
He is the one that I will love With all of my heart and my soul The one who I will stand beside In the happy and the sad, the good and bad He is the one I will love til my death Holding my hand during my has sigh, my last breath
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Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 22:33:50 GMT -6
Oh, my god, Vix! Now, you've got me crying! I felt like that once upon a time... And your piece so evoked and invoked that luscious flow of first blush emotions... You hath slain me with your elegant poeming, lady! And I thank you for the slaying... What a beautiful, heartfelt piece...There is a man, if I were honest, no matter what, with my dying breath, I shall whisper his name and die smiling, ever so sweetly...You took me there...To the destiny of that... Now, I ask you, is poetry not also, amongst many things, a metaphorical vehicle? Drat, I'm gushing...But, I loved this piece...May I garnish a copy of it? Nir.
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Post by michaellasalle on Sept 25, 2006 1:05:39 GMT -6
hes my destiny... so very loving truly with your expression.. this is beautiful deep and very romantic..... you did an awsome job with the visual presentation... take care, mike
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Post by vixen on Sept 25, 2006 9:08:22 GMT -6
Geeze..<blushing> absolutely you may have a copy. We all have a dream of what true love is.Its mostly an illusion I think though. Its like the smell of coffee in the morning. It always smells better the it actually tastes. Thanks for the cudoes ...Vixen
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Post by anirbas on Sept 25, 2006 23:51:05 GMT -6
ggglgggl...you should blush, it's a grrrreat poem...universal in it's longing... i dunno...it's possible, true love could smell as good as it taste... as i'm an avid coffee lover...LOL...love the smell and the taste... you're welcome on the kudoes...they are well deserved, lady. Nir
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Post by dawness on Dec 19, 2006 3:18:19 GMT -6
i am speechless...
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 19, 2006 7:28:55 GMT -6
Sorry I missed this one Vix ... It's a stunner!
David
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Post by anirbas on Dec 19, 2006 10:46:39 GMT -6
Yes, it is, David...Glad you found it and bumped it...Just throughly enjoyed the re-read! But... The mystery stunner is...Where did Michael La Salle go? Is he playing with us, the game Where's Waldo?
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Post by soulfir3 on Jan 1, 2007 14:25:43 GMT -6
love this piece, Vixen. thank you for sharing. Soul
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