Heaven’s Gate.

[DavidMc]

Heaven’s Gate.

When you find her treat her tenderly,
There are no more battles you need to win;
simply surrender to the power of love,
and treat her soul like porcelain.

Tell her all your worries and your fears,
she will be your friend throughout the years;
she won’t chide you for being weak,
you are the opposite halves of whom you seek

Together you will blend into something fine;
the final movement of a love divine,
And you’ll know it’s all been worth the wait,
As you stand together outside Heaven’s gate.

[vixen]

David how beautiful. A tender write so ful of promise and hope, but makes my eyes well up all the same. I'm not sure its beacause of the total romancism or because I don't know if this actually can happen. In any case it is one of your best. totally bereathaking. Vixen

[anirbas]

it not only can happen, Vix...it is happening...ggglgggl...all around the world...right in front of our eyes...people falling in love and fighting to maintain what is precious to them, no matter the circumstances nor distances...

David, I love it...Sabrina

[dawness]

to all that love is... i surrender! LOL. how fascinating can this be, david... and that picture, i wonder who she is.

[DavidMc]

dawness said:

to all that love is... i surrender! LOL. how fascinating can this be, david... and that picture, i wonder who she is.

Just some Angel I bumped into ;D

[DavidMc]

Just some Angel
I bumped into
on a distant forum

Just some Angel
that made me
sprout wings
and fly across
an ocean....

Just some Angel

[anirbas]

you never cease to leave me speechless...
sometimes, just plain deaf and mute...

another one i shall have to copy,
frame and hang in my sanctuary...

but, will you pretty please
take that picture down?
it's freaking me out...
running into myself...
is sort of an odd
experience...

i am glowing
like a lightening
bug, though...

must be
the company
i was keeping
at that moment...

[DavidMc]

Your command is my order .... ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

[bichsa]

Oh my eyes did well up also.Now that was an wonderful poetic love story ,which i truly loved ,and the angel piece right after ,my my Dave Well Done!
peace to you ,C
p.s leave that beautiful picture where it belongs....

[anirbas]

Yes, folks...Can you believe...
The poor man came all the way from England...
And I took him to a commercialized Chili's of all places??
LOL...I did manage to take him to two
restuarants that served
"authentic" Texmex...
Madres Cocina was one...

David, I can't remember the name of the one,
we went to, you took the picture of me leaning
tiredly on my elbow and pushing one eyeball
upwards into my forehead...Momma Something?
No, that's sounds Italian...Moma Mia's? No...
Drat...I'll have to clear that sudden
mystery up in my head with some backtracking...

Darling, you sly fox, now, I'm really laughing...
Yes, you did as I bid...
And yet, you didn't...
You just...Just...
Traded one for another...

And oh, brother...

Will you look at that, Cheryl?

Now, I see why Ivy is on me,
to buy new clothes from this picture...
ggglgggl...Guess the old addage is correct...
A picture is worth a thousand words...

And I didn't take him into Chili's dressed
like that, either...Looking like a bagladyLOL...
We were running around that day, comfortably
slobbed out, the both of us...and he wanted a picture
of one of the places we had dined at...

The night we went to Chili's, Cheryl...
He dressed in a yellow shirt and blue jeans...
I've never seen a man look that good in a yellow shirt...
Ooh-la-la...I wore black of course...My ever favorite color!

Got to love a man, that adores you and thinks you're beautiful...
Even in your baggiest clothes...And in what you think of, as your more
than one worst pose...Ivy doesn't know it...But, David just did with the showing
of that one picture, what she hasn't been able to get me to do, since I lost weight...
Stop wearing my "fatter days" clothes...She's right...I'm making myself look twice
the size I am wearing clothes that are to big for me and swallow me...

Ah, woman thy name is vanity...ggglgggl...I don't like this picture, either...

But, I like seeing me, through your eyes, darling...Long before you
made it over with that pesky camera of yours...LOL...
And I adore that picture of you, you've put up, instead
of Mister Victor...Sheesh...Felt the need for a very,
very cold shower just looking at it...Down, girl...
Down...Shutting up...Yes, folks...I'm smitten...
I've been bitten...By a big bug from England...
ggglgggl...Hate to sound like a pesky,
petulant, bratty child...But, darling...
That picture of me...Take it down!!!!!

heheheheheheehehe...I hate pictures of me...
I'm so not photogenic, in any way,
shape or fashion...I'm used to being...
The woman with the camera..
[to play off a Davidic turn of phrase]
Invisible in photo albums...
Because, I'm behind
the camera...
Not in front of it...

Sitting here wishing I'd stashed mi amor's camera
in my valise...ggglgggl...Instead of that pair of his underwear...hahahahahhahahahahahahaha....
Not...No need to count your skivvies, sweets!
I'm just teasing...Sabrina.

[anirbas]

...or am I? just teasing...ggglgggl...

[DavidMc]

Shut up!!!! The restaurant was called Martinez' ! ;D

[anirbas]

ggglgggl...Yes....Yessssssssssssss...That's it, Chief...Martinez'... ;D

[DavidMc]

;D ;D ;D ;D

We came big time in this one ! ;D

[anirbas]

Heaven's Gate, to me...
Isn't one place in particular...
It's fluidic...Transmutable...
It's nowhere and everywhere...
It moves as you move...
It is where you are...
Your three feet
of individual space...
That is Heaven's Gate...
To this soul, mate...

*ggglgggl*

[anirbas]

Yes, I was there...
And so worn out and tired
that night at Martinez'...
I wonder why? ggglgggl....

In so many ways, I'm still there...
In that week...In all those moments...

Sheesh...What now? Everything, just went all fuzzy...
The computer seems to be weeping...
Water spilling down it's face...
Wait a minute...It's not the entity,
experiencing a physical technical difficulty...
That big baby crying, is me...And grinning, at the same time...

I had such a lovely time with you...So, beautiful...
Thank you for the best and longest date I've ever had...

[anirbas]

I was just thinking of that picture...I look goofy in that one, too...
Southern fried happiness on the hoof, goofy...Oh, David...I miss you, so much...

[DavidMc]

Sabrina ... you are gorgeous to me, and I am so lucky to have found you Believe me, NO Woman other than you could have reached me . End of story.

David

[anirbas]

What a man...What a guy...Able to make a gal laugh and cry at the same time...
Drat you, David...How do you do that to me? Stop it...Not...Not...NOT...
And, not end of story...This is the song that never ends...
To quote Lambchop the sock puppet...Sabrina.

[DavidMc]

I Love you. I want you. I need you.

You write a poem
in every post
what Man could ask
for more?

David

[anirbas]

I love the things you say to me...
As much as the things you do for me...
I love how...You discovered the me...
No man had ever known before...

The one I protected, buried in a frost
lined and rimed box, packed on ice and put away
in my girlhood...Far, far away on the back
corner of a very cold, dark shelf in my mind...

I never expected to see that me, again...
The eleven year old girl that planted the sign
that read, Do Not Disturb...Do Not Wake the Dead...
Meant what she said...When she ripped out her heart,
and vowed never to fall in love...As love was an illusion...

Love was an unblemished spot on your face
waiting to become a black and blue bruise...
Love was a concussion...Love was suicide...
Obviously a self annihilation of the soul and body...
Love caused you to get beat and almost killed...
Love was murder...But, beyond that...
Love did not exist...It was a lie...
Men told and women believed...

Already at eleven, I had affirmed...
Nothing existed betwixt and between
adult males and females, beyond lust and contracts...
So, ripping out my heart seemed like a mercy killing to me...
I vowed I would love, yet never fall in love...When I grew up...
Men would be a means to an end to me...Not the be all, end all...

It was enough for the men in my life to own the body,
if not to know the woman, within...The hidden one...
The one that died before she was born...Written
out of the script, by a cynical eleven year old girlchild...
Raised just this side of hell, in the shell shocked trenches
of an honest to god, American Family Gothic story...

It was enough for me to know, though a man
might bruise me, use me...He could never hurt me...
As I was already dead on arrival...Long gone...
The lights were on, but the heart wasn't beating...

Fast forward to you, gatecrasher...
You whom knew what you wanted
and went straight for it...The core
of the ice queen...The woman
the little girl had aborted...
You skipped through my head,
danced through and around my soul...
Released my child murdered heart from it's secret box...
And a glacier thawed, melted and puddled...

Or perhaps, in her girlchild's cynical wisdom...
The child in me, never really killed the woman...
She put the woman on ice, to save her, for you...
The best of her, for her very own be all, end all man...

~*~

La-dee-dah and ooh-la-la...
You've got me singing love songs
and tra-la-la and it had to be youuuuuuu...
But, off I must skip...I've just been informed my writing
session I must nip in the bud...Mini-me is hungry...
And when is dinner going to be ready?
So off to the kitchen I trip...
Thoughts of you wrapped
round my head in a corona
of pink cotton candy moments...

[DavidMc]

I love this cyber smooching, but it ain't no substitute for the real thang. I love to show you off, I know that's a guy ting

... or should that be thing or thong

P.S. That green dang on chilis roof looks obscene

*ChuckleChuckle*

[anirbas]

I love this cyber smooching, but it ain't no substitute for the real thang. I love to show you off, I know that's a guy ting

*I'd tip my head back to receive your smooch anywhere...
As nothing can compare to a buss on the lips from you...
Cyber kiss or flesh to swell of flesh kiss that leaves us
both a-blush...I love it when you get your guy thing
on and show me off...Though being shy...
It does sometimes me, embarrass...

... or should that be thing or thong

*gigglegiggle...I ain't got a come back for that...
That just doesn't sound wrong...

P.S. That green dang on chilis roof looks obscene

*Looks like a chili pepper to me...ggglgggl...
But... it's also a symbol...Of love...
When I pass a Chili's now...
I get the warm fuzzies, inside...
It's cut and dried...My head's been fried...
You've crafted a romantic from me...
And everywhere I look, it's you, I see...

*ChuckleChuckle*

**Gigglegiggle**

[bichsa]

you two are just adorable ,nice photo of two nice people ,may your bond go on and on ,much respect to you both .I think your both at heavens gate.peace ,cheryl