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Post by anna3 on Nov 4, 2006 5:28:19 GMT -6
I change my name Almost every day Once I start to be brave And I see my self So strong so great As a queen of this game As a woman from your dream As the Athena with The sword of words To win this premier price You, I mean But you know That sometimes I’m so weak And I can’t even speak Standing so close to you And I don’t know at all What to do with this heart So broken-down, so afraid of This real truth or of even you And this life too Please help me To understand What should I do To be with you My friend
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Nov 4, 2006 23:44:34 GMT -6
Post by anirbas on Nov 4, 2006 23:44:34 GMT -6
I think longing is a double edged sword...That we fall upon, again and again, unrequitedly... I like the way you took this sword of longing and transformed it into something more... A poem...Thanks for sharing, Anna! Got more? Sabrina.
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Post by dawness on Nov 6, 2006 2:00:54 GMT -6
tenderly gut--wrenching anns... we pine, then we become fine ( hopefully). nice gem.
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