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Post by anna3 on Nov 5, 2006 5:12:35 GMT -6
My sweet man I’d like to ask you For something today I’d like you could love me this way I’d like you could read and enjoy this what I say Just like this I’d like to be your private distraction I’d like to be your favourite poet too I'm here for you
That you would live within this dream land Just with me I realised that I have already found The place for me and you at this world, So, you know that you have my heart But how do you feel with that?
I’m here to describe my dreams To open your eyes for these secrets of art That are natant from my heart That are taken from your charm My open soul is carrying you to this world Where you should exist, my love
I’m this woman who lives in your dreams So watch me and try to play fair Within this game called love, By the way, this play is for you That you could know me well With all the best I can give To the man
I’m happy with you like this I can dream about you always But I need this dream to live Do you think we could be Together like this in real? And at last baby, don’t forget You let me to do this again You let me drown in you Because you didn’t say "no" When I was asking you To stop me on this way to you If you don’t feel you could take this And now is too late, my sweet I just would like to believe that some day You could tell me what do you think About all these feelings I share with you And with the whole world too
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Post by vixen on Nov 7, 2006 14:08:21 GMT -6
Anna, beautifully said from the heart. It seems to be part of man that he cannot talk of these things. Its the damned upbringing, men are not raised to show what they feel, pity really. Because I know many (especially here) have a romantic soul Great job Vixen
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Post by dawness on Nov 16, 2006 4:18:44 GMT -6
vulnerable is the word. this, i like anns.
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 16, 2006 9:23:03 GMT -6
I don't think any man could tuen this down Anna. Nicely done ~ BNM
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Post by kathylynn on Nov 16, 2006 20:20:04 GMT -6
very nicely written work communications seems so hard sometimes doesnt it
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Post by anna3 on Nov 19, 2006 7:52:56 GMT -6
Thank you for all beutiful comments
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