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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 10, 2006 14:13:11 GMT -6
Heart breaking, words scathing another moment of unrest, from anger and betrayal is born emotions roll through me, I can barely breathe and I can feel the soul bruised in your eyes, I seek to understand the bitterness felt inside and the need for you too deceive
Words of love, fall from your lips hidden behind a masked smile caught out in your game of cat and mouse, I met the mistress head on, stomach churning, this time it's brought me to my knees our world so full of promise, is now laying in tatters at my feet
I've already let go, of the past before this.. and now, I can't stand to see let me remain blind - waiting in the shade too capture the rolling tide from fractured escapes Caught in your lies, your apologies are meaningless your claims, that it breaks your heart that it has been You, who has caused me to cry
Heart breaking, words scathing I am unwittingly caught between lies soul torn and heart upon my lap
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Post by DavidMc on Nov 12, 2006 4:46:59 GMT -6
A poem of great passion Soul. It's when we stop feeling our emotions the trouble starts ... write on poet David
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Post by dawness on Nov 13, 2006 9:33:28 GMT -6
go, go, glow, soul! the distress de--stresses me so.
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Post by soulfir3 on Nov 16, 2006 1:02:31 GMT -6
Thanks David and dawness
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 16, 2006 9:20:21 GMT -6
"our world so full of promise, is now laying in tatters at my feet" This line is so relatable SF. May we not crumble into a life of happiness facade. Amazing work! ~ BNM
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Post by soulfir3 on Dec 29, 2006 0:43:23 GMT -6
Deepest thanks for your comments and support
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