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Nov 20, 2006 19:27:42 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Nov 20, 2006 19:27:42 GMT -6
Screaming,
releasing,
the anguish of
losing you
Crying,
envoking,
the heat from
our touch
Believing,
pretending,
the world we
knew is
still here
Pretense,
disguising,
the place we
started from
is gone
Screaming,
releasing,
the truth is that
you never loved me
as I ever
loved you |
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Nov 20, 2006 19:43:29 GMT -6
Post by bichsa on Nov 20, 2006 19:43:29 GMT -6
another Gem,raw emotion ,great piece.
much peace,cheryl
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Nov 21, 2006 2:31:38 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Nov 21, 2006 2:31:38 GMT -6
many thanks bichsa . Soul
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Nov 21, 2006 4:22:24 GMT -6
Post by anna3 on Nov 21, 2006 4:22:24 GMT -6
Great oh yes sometimes we love to live as long as it possible in some dreams about love that has gone, it's sad but it's life sometimes, I love your poem and can feel it
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Nov 21, 2006 8:35:42 GMT -6
Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 21, 2006 8:35:42 GMT -6
Anger and pain but written with such passion. Awesome Soul. ~ BNM
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Nov 23, 2006 10:44:24 GMT -6
Post by dawness on Nov 23, 2006 10:44:24 GMT -6
so seering it brings joy to pain!
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Dec 29, 2006 0:41:14 GMT -6
Post by soulfir3 on Dec 29, 2006 0:41:14 GMT -6
thank you everyone
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