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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 30, 2006 12:23:24 GMT -6
Please forgive me if I leave you Sometimes this world just gets me down Alone inside can never break through This sadness in which I’ve drown
And who’s to care once come morning I’ll sleep forever missing you And who’s to share in my mourning It’s something I’d rather not put you through
But I don’t know how long I can go on being strong When nothing seems to go my way And I try to live Like there’s more that I can give But will you take it in the end Or am I losing out again
If I see you crying I know it would kill me So maybe I should just look away I want you to know that I always will be In your heart if you let me stay
And who’s to read what I am writing The ink’s the passion that I bleed Maybe making up was worth the fighting With your help I’ll fight for everything I have achieved
So will you say , baby I need you here with me today Let’s try to get through this pain together And I’ll do what I can To prove that I can be your man Because love is what it’s all about And this time I won’t lose out
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Post by anna3 on Nov 30, 2006 15:10:01 GMT -6
How I love it so moving words just from the heart such sad sometimes and beautiful becuase so real, wonderful write
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 2, 2006 5:28:57 GMT -6
Nice change of mood BNM. I particularly enjoyed this stanza.
David
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Post by tolteclogic on Dec 2, 2006 12:22:00 GMT -6
you touch a deep and resonate cord the pain of aloneness and dispair not always easy to share all the best in spirit tl
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Post by anirbas on Dec 2, 2006 20:32:09 GMT -6
excellent, evocative writing, as always, BNM...i'd say got more... but, i know you do...so, bring it...just bring it...
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