Shadow Play

[soulfir3]

Dipping between the leaves of the trees,
sun plays his games
as shadows tease along narrow path
hiding under footprints
all that is left of lovers

Shadows grow longer,
as night time appears
lovers tread printed
in the sands of time
an imprint of each, gently laid
fingers entwined with the other
voices softly murmuring
each with their own rhythm and rhyme

[magpie]

nice visuals in this one's first verse - good reading

[anirbas]

concrete visuals shadowed by the abstractism of romance...luscious canvas of words...
thanks for sharing, S'fir...got more? Nir.

[soulfir3]

Thanks magpie and Nir

[dawness]

foreplay? this is both subtle and firey i like!

[vixen]

Oh, the language of love. Beautifully scribed. I love the lyricism of this one. Makes me want to be in love and romantic. Great as always Vixen