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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jan 19, 2007 12:34:00 GMT -6
Stops beating Keeps bleeding I'm done crying over you Deep seeding This feeling So now what am I suppose to do
I've taken this bullet to the heart one too many times Everything just falls apart no matter how hard I try When I think it's getting better, life must totally disagree Because the only thing worse than living is not having you with me
Now empty If you'd let me I'd take my own life Quit breathing Stop believing That in time it will be all right
It hasn't been since you have gone I cannot win when I'm always wrong Why can't I be the one you want Instead of a memory who always haunts The loneliness that's killing me I close my eyes and yet still I see The only love I ever knew Now is crimson which is soaking through The hollow void inside my chest I apologize for the mess I do not mean to bleed so much But it only stops when I feel your touch Upon my skin and to my lips I can't escape the taste of your kiss If you could leave me with one last thing Just say that we meant something
Still beating I'm needing To just get over you Here within I let the chamber spin That is what I'm about to do
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Post by Sam on Jan 19, 2007 13:42:48 GMT -6
Deep Wounds!!!
Very powerful!!
Sam
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Post by anirbas on Jan 19, 2007 23:42:43 GMT -6
Brilliant, vivid, intense visuals...Riveting read, BNM, as always! Nir.
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Post by dawness on Jan 23, 2007 0:29:30 GMT -6
devastatingly lucid! beautiful rant and gem, brands. a real wow!
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Post by bichsa on Jan 24, 2007 7:04:51 GMT -6
wow ,very powerful indeed may your heart rest ,and know it will heal,peace to you and your heart!,cheryl
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Post by vixen on Jan 26, 2007 15:53:27 GMT -6
Holy smokes!! Smoking hot. Been there done that. Absolutely amazing!!!!. Your talent leaves me breathless!!!!. Always Vixen
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