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Post by soulfir3 on Jan 27, 2007 16:51:30 GMT -6
strewn across the floor like a litter of autumn leaves the faintest sign, that life still exists inside of this empty shell scars strategically sliced across and over in a hypnotic zig-zag from where the harsh touch of a lover silently, ambiguously lays a map of forgotten desires invisible to the naked eye.. but to me they are as plain as day their ink stains raising visibly painful to touch as I feel them as though they are my own child like impressions recounted memories half remembered threaded together with part truth and part.. "i wish it had been like this" bittersweet is our failure, knowing that my love was not enough too hold you and I together a paper heart - burnt edges coloured with age into a timeless tint of yellowing brown
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Post by dawness on Jan 29, 2007 10:52:03 GMT -6
ooooohh, what a heart breaking, lovely gem this is, soul...so full of angst, i need a hanky! beautiful as always.
"memories half remembered threaded together with part truth and part.."
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Post by DavidMc on Jan 29, 2007 11:46:40 GMT -6
You know Soul ...
I WISH I had been as aware as you at 29!
You are a young Woman ... but a very wise old soul!
Respect, David.
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Post by soulfir3 on Jan 29, 2007 14:29:41 GMT -6
heartfelt thanks, dawn and david. Soul
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jan 30, 2007 8:18:12 GMT -6
her life lies scattered in tiny pieces on the floor, remember you can always piece them back together. Amazing work soul! ~ BNM
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