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Post by DavidMc on Aug 30, 2006 9:54:57 GMT -6
Softly I treadSoftly I tread to the top of the stairs, Cobra like rope coiled in my hand; Sleeping I hear their Mothers children, Off in some dream redundant of cares Peeking through cracks of half light, Memories pulse in the temples of shame; Bitter is the taste of unrequited blood, Rope safely attached to the banister tight Softly I climb to the top of the rail, Relief and finality excite in my bones; Sleep softly dear children, dream well, Know that I succeed; in this I did not fail.
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Post by anirbas on Aug 31, 2006 7:09:42 GMT -6
Softly I tread...Slipping in to say, I enjoy this darklicious poem, I just read! Got more?
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Post by Juan Castrocafe on Sept 11, 2006 16:10:39 GMT -6
go David...into the shadows of a dark corridor...leaping off stairs..bungees on the neck...well brought in the intention of the person...you could sense the person had a great deal of conflict as you showed the psychology of cause in there..subtly or softly...
johnm
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Post by pegesus on Nov 26, 2006 4:03:24 GMT -6
in every soul there lurks a dark cornerr, for a poet we end up having towrite about our dark corner, good write david
peg
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 26, 2006 12:34:13 GMT -6
Venture into what lurks ahead and maybe you will know how it feels to be dead! Awesome piece Daivd! ~ BNM
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