A TIME TO REMEMBER

[liquidpromise]

One might read this title and think…
Something good should come of this thought
Yet, reality is not always so kind
My remembrance is of pain often brought

About all of the things I wish not to know
Things I wish I could say I never knew
The one memory of yesterday that sticks out most…
Is the love I desired and the loss of it because of you

Lacking in motherhood
Your perception of me, your one big lie
All of your false hopes in this wasted child
Leaves bitter resentments in my failures to die

For this reason I search my heart
And find many, too many things I often regret
While I long for a single moment
I might have at one time treasured

I find a time to remember is best
…If I just simply forget

[nimbusGLOW]

mmmm...

there is an intriguing sense of 'paradox' in this
the ending is another beginning.

neat and NICE...

'NIM's

[anirbas]

For this reason I search my heart
And find many, too many things I often regret
While I long for a single moment
I might have at one time treasured

I find a time to remember is best
…If I just simply forget

~fragmentation of Laurenic verse.

~*~

I so felt this piece...This work of high art left me speechless...
Beautiful, Lauren...Breathtaking offering...Just breathtaking...Nir.

[liquidpromise]

Thank you, both very much!