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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 17, 2006 0:47:54 GMT -6
PLAY-TIME !
and
as
our
fun
begins
all
heaven
bursts
forth
it's Play-Time !
time for titillation
preview of coming attractions...
hugs
tickles
kisses
and
giggles
the
inspired
comedy
genius
of
crazy bubbles.
sillyballoons.
abundant delights.
simply
tantalizing
and
amazing
and yet
there's more
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with
so
much
fanciful
whimsy
to
be
treasured
and
so
many
epicurean
pleasures
to
be
savored
spontaneous exhilaration
gives way to
exulted euphoria
the absurd
is transcended
by the Divine
mere mortals
are transfigured
into Joy-Magnets
how
delicious
and
luscious
so
dessert
anyone
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Post by shell on Sept 17, 2006 8:39:01 GMT -6
i really, really, REALLY enjoyed this! Cosmos has the most ineffable sense of humour, i am sure of it ... i hear them chuckling at me daily! I love that this poem twinkles with mischief and reminds us that as above so below has an up-side ... FUN and laughter, sheer delight in being and sharing ... and yes please, dessert ... with cream on it lol
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Post by rrw on Sept 17, 2006 9:37:00 GMT -6
Very nice, Nim and I love the style. A little haunting even in its giddy flavor. This piece appears like a ghost! Am I sure that what I see is real? Nice job.
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Post by anirbas on Sept 18, 2006 8:49:20 GMT -6
Whimsically...um...er...Nimsically adorable! Nir.  |
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Post by vixen on Sept 20, 2006 6:59:06 GMT -6
There truely is a depth here... sometimes I think your a tease for all its joy it is also very thought provoking. And for some reason I think I need to take a shower... a cold one. lol Awesome job Vixen  |
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 24, 2006 18:20:16 GMT -6
NOW...PLEASE...!
Mommy
is in Daddy's car...
Daddy
is in Mommy's car
I'm not with anybody
sitting here alone on my bicycle...
looking at Mommy
looking at Daddy
both of them
looking at each other
both of them
now looking at me
and I just bet
we are all wanting to know
why are Mommy and Daddy
where they are
and why are we all
just looking at each other
when we all really really
want to go to the ice cream place...
and walk there...
not go in any old car
cause when they walk to it
I ride my bicycle in circles around them
so let's go already...
NOW...PLEASE...!
I bet Mommy and Daddy
are playing tricks on me again
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Post by anirbas on Sept 24, 2006 20:42:30 GMT -6
lol...nimsical...this is great...you were so in the voice
of a child throughout the entire piece.
nir
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Post by dawness on Sept 25, 2006 1:07:21 GMT -6
don't burst my prett balloons let them fly and kis all the cotton candy up up in the sky. weeeeh!!! i'm a child again. thanks nims, for this thread.  |
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Sept 25, 2006 13:17:50 GMT -6
FUNNIER STUNTS
I blew up a great big bunch
of white and purple balloons
and stuck them all in my closet
so Mommy would be surprised
cause when she opened the door
she got a face-full of squeaky balloons...hee hee
oh sure...now the joke's on me
cause she and Daddy had some fun
blowing up a whole bunch more of 'em
and they filled my whole room to the top
so when I opened my door to go in
I got attacked by the 'Balloon Creatures'
oh you think that's funny...huh?
well you just wait and see my next stunt
I got a wild idea to open the great big bag
of that white 'pop-corn-stuffing' that's in the attic
and dump the whole mess in their bed
I bet Mommy and Daddy never top that one...giggle giggle
I know...I know
they keep trying to
and they never come up
with funnier stunts than me
but I've been told
there's always a first time...egads!
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 5, 2006 20:37:46 GMT -6
BLESSINGS
of Silliness
...
'NIM's
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 6, 2006 2:34:58 GMT -6
...
and LAUGHTER as well
...
'NIM'-doodles
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Post by nimbusGLOW on Oct 6, 2006 2:44:41 GMT -6
TOO MUCH LAUGH** **TER
oops!
too much laughter
I just got the hiccups from it
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from it
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from it
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oh drat it anyway!
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hey knock it off !
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NOW CUT IT OUT CAN'T YA ?
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very funny
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