Passing Out Parade

DavidMc Administrator Posts: 2,508	Passing Out Parade Oct 23, 2006 16:38:34 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DavidMc on Oct 23, 2006 16:38:34 GMT -6 From thine own hands these thorns were made.. Between the bathroom and the bedroom His body splayed A madness keenly felt but often misconveyed.. As daily legions join The passing out parade
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anirbas Admin In memory of when I cared. Posts: 10,241	Passing Out Parade Oct 24, 2006 9:20:00 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by anirbas on Oct 24, 2006 9:20:00 GMT -6 Nitty gritty reality wrought into verse so heartrendingly beautiful... Takes a fair amount of b*lls to write this kind of stuff... Need a bucket to carry those bad boys in, Chief? ggglgggl...Sabrina

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Passing Out Parade Oct 24, 2006 11:46:34 GMT -6

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Post by shell on Oct 24, 2006 11:46:34 GMT -6

Both of these poems are indescribably poignant. I often think by knowing who we are not, we reveal who we might truly choose to be .. it's that "no pain no gain" thing perhaps, though i was never too keen on that principle ... awesome, brutal writing, David!

brandnewmessiah Member Words are the ash which spew from my tongue Posts: 358	Passing Out Parade Oct 25, 2006 6:28:36 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by brandnewmessiah on Oct 25, 2006 6:28:36 GMT -6 Wow, some awesome imagery in this piece. Nice work David. ~ BNM
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blownawayby: Sabs&Co!!!! It is I, Daph, aka blownaway, still alive, kicking a little lower for all the wear, but alive and so happy I came across Poetry Seasons' email address today. Hope to drift in and out a little more often than every death of a pope!

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artolmaeus: it is Sunday, the first day of the week and I have been awake too long, good night, thank you for this thing you do that has been ongoing, for as long as it does, well, I am glad it is here... Sept 17, 2023 0:23:26 GMT -6

anirbas: OMG! Blownawayby!!! Daph, I am so glad you found us, again! I always wonder where everyone goes, or how they are, when they disappear. I have been MIA for a while, now, myself. Good to see you! Oct 16, 2023 22:37:35 GMT -6 *

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