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Post by glenn on Dec 4, 2006 11:05:50 GMT -6
too much troubles the world the world is too much with us in the darkness of night bombs explode the senses and few are the places to rest
sleep is disturbed by the inexorable clanking of tanks the shriek of jet airplanes that leave death in their wake swallows up the wail of an infant that lies clutching his dead mother's breast
silence is strangled with telephone wires and computer cables radar and satellite beams crush the skull with noise pressure collapses the soul and throttles peace of mind
a sudden lurid flash and all the bright colours blur and fade in radioactive decay a pale deadly white chemical dust envelops and chokes the world and all is silent
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Post by anirbas on Dec 4, 2006 13:53:13 GMT -6
this poem left me silent...we know that doesn't happen often...LOL... you know you've written a hell of a poem, when it leaves me speechless...
so glad and good to see you, Glenn...Sabrina
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Post by glenn on Dec 4, 2006 14:07:16 GMT -6
Thanks, Sabrina. I'm happy to be here.
Definitely a dark poem, that one. The italicized line is from William Wordsworth.
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 4, 2006 16:12:18 GMT -6
A very powerfull scene you have drawn for us here Glenn, and I particularly liked these lines.
The title is also a nice twist on the Christmas hymn. Thanks for sharing.
David
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Post by tolteclogic on Dec 4, 2006 16:25:01 GMT -6
beautiful chem trails line the sky like clouds make pretty designs particulates dampen global warming quite a bit accidental salvation
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Post by anirbas on Dec 13, 2006 10:03:06 GMT -6
You're very welcome, Glenn. Accolades are well deserved in your case. As long as I've read you, I've never seen you throw anything at the proverbial wall, but the most excellent writing, whether dark or light in ambience, bearing and demeanor. So, on that note, got more? LOL Sabrina.
*nice chemically enhanced gem you followed up with, Cleveland!*
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