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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jan 3, 2007 10:00:00 GMT -6
 You want suicide
I’ll give you suicide
A lovely reminder of just how I died
Blood on the wall
Seen by all
And it’s for you I’m done living
In this pain
Of all unchanged
Can no longer stand by and watch it all stay the same
An empty soul
Wrapped in a bow
This is the gift I am giving
Severed wrists
I can’t resist
Testing the theory that I may be missed
Not by one
Not by none
I die alone just as I lived
In a pool of imperfection
The epitome of rejection
I am the son
To be forgotten
To that which I’ve been held captive
So now let me go
Into the shadows
Where the darkness is peace to my heart
Descending it beats
To the hell underneath
This is how I imagined my death
Dying alone
A corpse of dust and bones
Blowing away in the wind
I’m as cold as the breeze
With a finale kiss upon your cheek
Sighs, I love you with my last breath |
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Post by anirbas on Jan 3, 2007 10:25:09 GMT -6
Damn...Damn...Just damned hellacious writing, BNM
Sabrina.
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Jan 3, 2007 12:16:17 GMT -6
Wow thank you Anir, for your comments I'm speechless. And I hope I didn't unearth painful memories for you that was not my intention with this piece. I write pieces like this to deal with my own feelings. When I'm able to put to paper the drowning emotions I have it helps me to be able to look upon them and reflect what may happen if I were to let pain overtake me and actually follow through on what I feel. I guess in a way I talk myself out of it. Let's hope it stays that way. I appreciate all your support! ~ BNM
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Post by bichsa on Feb 4, 2007 15:46:41 GMT -6
painfully powerful ,I never dwell in this part much ,but know You are never Alone!NEVER!
peace Cheryl
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Post by soulfir3 on Feb 4, 2007 23:50:49 GMT -6
"So now let me go Into the shadows Where the darkness is peace to my heart Descending it beats To the hell underneath This is how I imagined my death Dying alone A corpse of dust and bones Blowing away in the wind I’m as cold as the breeze With a finale kiss upon your cheek Sighs, I love you with my last breath" this is me, so powerfully have you described everything I've felt and experienced in recent days.. have you been looking over my shoulder ? As always, a brilliant piece of writing - and yes, I hope that you are around for many more days to come yet  |
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Post by dawness on Feb 10, 2007 9:47:16 GMT -6
chilling me to bits... speck of light in here, " Sighs, I love you with my last breath
chilling me to bits here though i see a speck of light,here..
"With a finale kiss upon your cheek
Sighs, I love you with my last breath"
i do dark poetry as i feel there is always that tinge of hope hanging in there. nice one, B!
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Post by bloodnsorrows on Feb 13, 2007 0:14:40 GMT -6
Such cleverly written pieces, always so dark and disturbing, but that's what I love about you and your pieces.
Missing you my friend. It's been a very long time...
BNS/L
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