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Post by brandnewmessiah on Mar 13, 2007 7:51:15 GMT -6
Painted eyes they lie Looking happy, dying inside Always afraid to cry The disgrace of shame a confused bride A paper crane she folds Flying free on wings of gold Into a darkness, where it becomes a crow Scavenging on what is left of her soul
Was it you hiding Beneath the pale of a lonely heart Walking amongst the crimson petals That fall with your tears in a world that’s torn apart By the hands of time Which stopped long ago The stem that breaks in her grasp Now is bleeding slow
Crooked smile in pain She can’t remember her own name To them we all look the same An innocent clown for which to blame Of misery in beauty’s arms She fakes her way through with her charm Unable to disarm She cuts away all those who caused her harm
Was it you who’s fighting To hold onto your last bit of a humility Wasn’t so inviting After he took your freedom and made you see A garden of sorrow decaying In the bask of a rising sun To the thorn you’re praying That your dying heart may be impaled by one
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Post by Sam on Mar 13, 2007 15:39:29 GMT -6
You are just amazing!!
Sam
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Post by soulfir3 on Mar 13, 2007 16:47:26 GMT -6
Brilliant work
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Post by anirbas on Mar 13, 2007 21:43:53 GMT -6
Crooked smile in pain She can’t remember her own name To them we all look the same An innocent clown for which to blame Of misery in beauty’s arms She fakes her way through with her charm Unable to disarm She cuts away all those who caused her harm
~BNM.
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Evocative verse. It just is. Anir.
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Post by DavidMc on Mar 14, 2007 6:39:06 GMT -6
This is a supurb piece of writing Troy. I particulary enjoyed the following verse.
Was it you hiding Beneath the pale of a lonely heart Walking amongst the crimson petals That fall with your tears in a world that’s torn apart By the hands of time Which stopped long ago The stem that breaks in her grasp Now is bleeding slow
Regards, David
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Post by vixen on Mar 25, 2007 21:46:46 GMT -6
Wow, this is undescribable. You are totally amazing. Loved it a lot. Vixen
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