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Post by DavidMc on Apr 14, 2007 2:28:50 GMT -6
 Drowning in the shallow end
i threw the yakking tube out the window
and watched it kill an old woman
as she was passing with her dog
BELOW IN THE STREET...........
I had got deeper in than I ever
WANTED TO BE AND NOW
I’M WET ALL OVER…;
So i can’t find a towel to wipe my face...
i can’t find a cop to arrest me
They're all out giving parking tickets
To debt collectors…. or hearing
the confessions of priests downtown..14/04/07 |
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Post by dog on Apr 14, 2007 23:38:11 GMT -6
interesting, intriguing piece, DavidMc. good thing the yakking tube killed the old woman and not the dog or i would have had to complain this poem advocated cruelty to animals lol Dog
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Post by DavidMc on Apr 15, 2007 2:54:26 GMT -6
interesting, intriguing piece, DavidMc. good thing the yakking tube killed the old woman and not the dog or i would have had to complain this poem advocated cruelty to animals lol Dog This was a purely an 'experimental' piece. I've been taking photos graphs of my immediate environment, ( the pub has been burnt out for years) and I just wrote some stream of consciousness words to the pic. David |
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