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Post by brandnewmessiah on Apr 17, 2007 11:19:36 GMT -6
Pale is the skin Until vibrant with color The black of a bruise The blue of another A mural to pain Watercolor from her eyes The love turned to stain Every time she cries
Fear is the brush He dabs in his hate She tries to hush But the silence comes too late Anger in red Splattered on the wall In a still life of suffering The canvas does fall
Now all is dark No hues but gray What once was a rainbow Has all but faded away Leaving blotches on a floor And her as a center piece And just like before Another painting has ceased
He washes his brushes Tries to hide his art She helps him clean Burdening the fault as her part Knowing his work is unfinished She believes it is love And with a soul diminished She poses as painted blood
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Post by Sam on Apr 17, 2007 13:15:59 GMT -6
You are just good!!!!!!!
Sam
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Post by anirbas on Apr 17, 2007 23:44:42 GMT -6
Startling, eloquent, beautiful sadness, Messiah. Sabrina.
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Post by vixen on Apr 18, 2007 15:59:54 GMT -6
Messiah, you do paint a picture very well, I could feel this one like my own heart beating. Vixen
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