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Post by brandnewmessiah on Aug 7, 2007 7:55:06 GMT -6
Here I am A broken man Giving you The right to choose How to kill me Make me bleed Dying slowly It’s what I need
Sinking in Peel back my skin Drink my blood It’s what you love Take my heart Tear it apart With my last breath I ask for death
Living for me is what’s scary So eat, drink, and be buried
In my grave Will I be saved Under dirt I no longer hurt Set me free Rest in peace Make me please One of the deceased
Give me torture Give me pain On your knife My blood will stain Crimson red Leave me for dead I promise to Scream for you
Living for me is what’s scary So eat, drink, and be buried
On my knees I’m begging please End it now I’ll tell you how Grind my bones Crush my skull Gut me until Your knife gets dull
Open my chest And eat what’s left Feed on my soul It’s good I’m told Lick your lips The blood it drips From your chin In the end
Dead is this life that I’m sharing So eat, drink, and be buried
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Post by anirbas on Aug 7, 2007 9:09:38 GMT -6
Evocative, splendidly written piece!!!!!! It just is...
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Post by Bronwyn on Aug 11, 2007 13:48:37 GMT -6
good writing here, woohoo. made me think of creating the words 'eat, drink, and get married', but that wouldn't do for darkpoetry. anyway, great writing there.
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