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Post by anirbas on Aug 8, 2007 15:46:56 GMT -6
somewhere, near or far, if you listen closely you can hear the sound of losing ground: the sprong of a spring coming undone; the whish and the snap of a wrist as an unsuspecting chicken's head is brutally wrung; the fraying of the hardwiring in another's head sizzling, sending out hazy signals of insanity in thin tendrils of green smoke that reek of the stench of ozone; moth eaten and rotted fabric rip, rip, ripping at the threadbare seams; a lifeline coming unknotted; the ending whispers of an old man's dreams; worlds being torn apart, disconnecting, severed into gory chunks of weightless space detritus.
but these miserous sounds never seem to stop the sun from shining starkly down into the eyes like a raygun; or keep the walking dead from voraciously threatening to kill and eat the very spirits of the living, always losing ground...
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Post by Bronwyn on Aug 11, 2007 13:51:55 GMT -6
deeeep and darrrrrrk, sister that was deep and dark... very good writing.
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Post by anirbas on Aug 12, 2007 19:36:15 GMT -6
Thank you, Bronwyn. Always honored to see you hanging out and about the forum. Sabrina. ;D
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