Love You To Death

[soulfir3]

close your eyes my beloved..

nails of heated touch
course along skin,
beckoning for the blood too well
and pool deep from in
opening your heart
and your mind
kissing those happy memories
into a past lifetime
nightmares wished into
the heart so pure
my touch corrupting
your heart and desire
the blade of knife
along your veins
opening the beat,
counting too ten..
tasting your essence
drinking your life

..whimper not my beloved

feel the insipid touch
of my body to yours
gliding you against
the smoothness of steel
kissing the soft swell shoulder
along the collar bone
melting to you
claimed as mine,
screams which echo
inside the darkness
silent witnesses flee
leaving you behind
my hand to yours
pulling you close
your end is forsaken
as i draw your final
breath from tender neck

... staring into your now vacant eyes,
staring back at me

[dawness]

daring and visually laden! thanks.

[DavidMc]

Wow! This is a real blood sucker of a peom .. and where the heck did you get that image?

Brilliant!

[soulfir3]

Thanks for the wonderful comments, Dawness and David.
The image is one I've had for ages, hidden away in the very large folder of images I've collected in the last 4-5 yrs. I'm just glad I finally found a use for this one.


xx Soul

[anirbas]

okie dokie...now, i'm gonna have nightmares, tonight...thanks to you, S'fir...hehe...
oh, my stars...ripping poeming, lady...absolutely ripping...*WALLBANGER*...Nir

[soulfir3]

*passes Nir her very own personal Teddy Bear..hopefully he will keep at bay those pesky nightmares *

thank you for the compliments. X Soul