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Post by brandnewmessiah on Apr 3, 2007 8:45:24 GMT -6
 How her howl it calls to me
Lusting lips of her lycanthropy
Upon me devour
In this midnight hour
It’s my heart I give to you
In a split eye I’m hypnotized
Opens the wounds I’ve tried to hide
Gives me new form
While the blood is still warm
It’s my sacrifice to the tooth
It’s in your bite
What changes me on the inside
From man to animal
A creature birthed from how I died
The goddess moon
Can’t come to soon
And I’ll hunt for you again
I roam alone without my prey
Black as night with a touch of gray
Hiding in the shadows
Where only the beast at heart can follow
Now can she offer her growl
Dawn brings about the man
From four to two legs I now stand
Yet, I still remember
In the snow of December
Her tracks left in the soil
It’s in your bite
That which made me feel more alive
Now mortal only to silver
A nocturnal jackal has arrived
The kiss of death
Was upon her breath
You bring the hunt to me again |
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Post by anirbas on Apr 3, 2007 9:05:47 GMT -6
Even without the Boris Vallejo and Julie Bell-esque imaging, this offering
had legs that ran with the imagination and a throat that howled!
Stellar writing, it just is! Great to see someone banging
at the keys, ginning and spinning offerings
in the Dungeon! Got more?
"Dawn brings about the man
From four to two legs I know stand
Yet, I still remember
In the snow of December
Her tracks lefts in the soil"
~BNM.
*the niggling proofreader in me, wants to ask, did you mean now, instead of know?*
Is that a Boris and Julie image? Sure looks like it. Nir.
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Apr 3, 2007 9:18:45 GMT -6
Thanks anir, Nope I meant to say now and yes that is a boris and julie image.
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Post by anirbas on Apr 3, 2007 9:37:53 GMT -6
You're welcome! I adored this poem!
Just use the modify option to change it...
If you like...From know to now...
I adore that feature, modify.
Use it like a cross in here to ward off typos...LOL...
I've got some of their works, Boris and Julie's, with dragons
in calender form, I bought just for inspirationing purposes.
When I write of dragons, I like to look at pictures of them...
Helps me to cypherically visualize them into poem form...
Take care of you and get back to work on more offerings
for The Dungeon...LOL...Just a Nir.
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Post by anirbas on May 6, 2007 21:34:07 GMT -6
Earmarking this one with a bump as a must read too, MsM...
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Post by MsM on May 6, 2007 21:42:12 GMT -6
know whats funny m'Lady I read this one last night...and I loved it for its images and words...tis a lively read...very lively...you are right...wonderful peom and poet... Ms.M  |
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Post by wistfuldragon on Jun 15, 2007 10:57:45 GMT -6
BNM...you are addictive...these images and these words...WOW!...reread this one several times and love it more each time...
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