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Post by roadrunner3 on Jul 10, 2007 4:37:08 GMT -6
Of Myths and Maidens
The battle of the sexes, while not new, Is getting old and messing up my sleep, The ancient myths can set my mind askew, Transcendent forces moving in the deep. In timidly approaching WOMAN's lair, I see her beauty threat'ningly displayed, I crave the source of nurture hidden there, But know sometimes no sooner suckled...slayed. Old moorings now cast off and mind awhirl, Suspicions long suppressed become quite clear, Behind the blinding WOMAN stands a girl Who yearns for human visage to appear. We take each other's hands now free at last To live and laugh and love without the past.
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Post by anirbas on Jul 10, 2007 7:45:12 GMT -6
This is a well written, intuitive piece, Rnnr. Absolutely beautiful.
"Behind the blinding WOMAN stands a girl Who yearns for human visage to appear."
These two lines are true of every woman no matter how strong she may appear... Thanks for sharing this sonnet here with us. Sabrina.
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Post by DavidMc on Jul 11, 2007 3:19:38 GMT -6
Excellent my friend!
David
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Post by roadrunner3 on Jul 11, 2007 13:56:58 GMT -6
Thanks Sabrina and David! Y'all really too kind. I confess to trying to shed a little light through the murky waters that I'm probably totally immersed in with a somewhat undeveloped talent...but I really do appreciate the encouragement. RR3
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Post by anirbas on Jul 11, 2007 20:34:11 GMT -6
nothing wrong with your talent...and, you're very welcome...it's not kindness... the piece is excellent, beautiful and well written...period...
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