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Post by DavidMc on Nov 6, 2006 9:58:13 GMT -6
Solitude
Passing many tired days in aimless solitude, Bespoke of wounded hearts in timeless solitude
Fragile company of strangers long since past, You sink deeper down into painless solitude
The hungry hands of both love and hate, Pluck the souring grapes off vineless solitude
Once upon a rainless moonlit summer night, Stars smoked across the world in hopeless solitude
Sorrow at the friends and multitudes denied, Building brick by brick a wall of boundless solitude
Zephyl, your life is closed to all who knock, Forever locked behind the door of endless solitude
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Post by anirbas on Nov 11, 2006 19:23:35 GMT -6
is it a ghazal or an echo poem? LOL... beautiful work, as always...Nir
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Post by DavidMc on Nov 17, 2006 13:50:52 GMT -6
It's a Ghazal ... I really enjoy this form as you might have guessed ;D I find it interesting to write in a structured way from time to time as it a lot of my stuff is spontanious combustion LOL! I know you write a neat Haiku and should share more here Love, David
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Post by brandnewmessiah on Nov 17, 2006 14:07:11 GMT -6
Brilliant piece David! Awesome words and flow. ~ BNM
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Post by DavidMc on Dec 7, 2006 8:23:04 GMT -6
Thanks BNM
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Post by soulfir3 on Mar 28, 2007 4:59:06 GMT -6
wonderful David, i'm intrigued with the writing style.
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Post by anirbas on Feb 28, 2020 18:44:36 GMT -6
~BumP~
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